How Cute! XD I love it! I laughed so hard I nearly cried! Wished it would have been a little longer, though. Awesome work, as always! X3

Oh my glob, how have I never seen this beautiful work of art? Your writing is always like stepping into another world. I can see and believe everything that's happening - it flows naturally. Thank you for this!

Tekko

*squeals like a 5-year-old on Christmas morning* I cannot handle the levels of cuteness this story has made me experience. I loveloveLOVE it - gah, I'll be back with more reviews on different stories xD ta-ta for now :)

Yup, I still love this, even after I've read it like a billion tines already. :)

You're awesome. This story was awesome. I absolutely positively FUCKING LOVED IT! I think this may be my favorite akuroku. And I have read A LOT of akuroku. I usually do read it cause i love Axel and Roxas like a mother loves her newborn baby, or a churchgoer loves jesus, or an otaku loves anime-cons. And yes, i'll even admit that i luv the lemon juice, I mean, who doesn't love reading about Axel and Roxy gettin hot n heavy? But seriously, SERIOUSLY. This. Was. Amazing. This is the best akuroku I've read. There wasn't a lot of explicit baby making. There wasn't a lot of explaining and getting-to-know-each-other boring deets. It was the perfect balance of love and lust. I loved it. I LOVED IT. And I am not a person to use the word "love" lightly. Sure, I say luv, and lav, and sometimes lov, but rarely ever the actual word. This? This I love. And it was a one-shot. And I despise one-shots. But this? There are no amount of words i could string together to explain to you how much i loved this story. I am in no sense poetic. I'm actually pretty blunt, and I rant when I've read something that completely blew my mind, like I'm ranting right now. I loved this story. I love it. It's amazing. You're amazing. You should be proud you wrote this. Me, as well as probably half of the akuroku fans are eatin those jelly beans because of your amazing writing and awesome sense of imagination and creation. Seriously. I love it. You're awesome. Thank you for creating this and sharing it with the world. Thank you.

Ah god, this is amazing, perfect sdkjbs I especially love how you portray Roxas calm and composed outwardly and not all blushy or whatevs like most others do, it's very refreshing indeed gosh, I love Larxene here as well, not a bitch but a bitch friend-haha, and Axel is Axel-hot and adorable as always XD The chalkboard parts were epic, almost as much as Roxas' orders-Well done had me craving some coffee now!

That story was so cute! You are an amazing writer!

Oh god I loved Larx in this so freaking much! This was so cute. Fast paced but really freaking CUTE. I love cafe stories. I can't help myself. And there you go my favorite Akuroku writer, writing it! I am very pleased haha. Very much so!

Ahh, nothing like reading another one of your awesome stories to make my day. This was so funny and cute. :)

"I have a boner."
I could not breathe I was laughing so hard

Another great fic :D

In my quest to find a superb one shot of AkuRoku, I came across this. I don't know how you did it, but this entire thing had me grinning like an idiot throughout. I'm sure if it went on for any longer, my cheeks would've started to ache. Thank you so much for writing this wonderful fic. Seriously. It just made me so happy.

Yayay! Another amazing fic by you! honestly I love all your Fics. You are amazing

Okay ,... hoyl fuck . Axel he 's so silly ;3 And Roxas is ahh seems demanding , knows what he wants kind of guy . he reminds me of Kisa in a way from Sekai-Ichi Hatsukoi xD

Super sweet fic ! ;D Putting Larxene in here made it all the more funnier ! great job and the broad thing with the recommendations was a really cute and brilliant idea ! :D Thanks for writing this !

Okay, this is so super cute and hilarious and oh-my-God worthy. xD I love the "Oh! Kind of like me bottoming!" part. I cracked the fuck up at that part. I literally LOL'd. That was beautiful.

Love this so much! So beautifully written!
You, my friend, are the greatest writer on this entire site. Love the story and the plot was great!
AkuRoku forever!
Thanks for the fic!
-Sam