There is only one story listed on AO3 under mothbone, and not in this fandom? *desperate sobbing*

I adore Jakarel with all my heart, and her dynamics with Khan fuel my pyres more avidly than torchwood.

Ah, what a tantalisingly delicious story.

I can't find the story on AO3?

Please, come back!

Brilliant!

I'm crying and oh this is amazing why are you so amazing and Khan and Jakarel and omigod you're fabulous

This is
I can't even
Wow

I can proudly say that you've written me into a berserker's rage for the augments. Especially Jackarel. She brings out the warrior in me, to fight for her against the humans. I must say, I hope there's death & destruction in her wake. I'd love for this one to be a tragedy of an ending. There would not be enough tissues in the world to yield my tears, if you had them escape & her madness to take over. It would be one of those beautiful deaths, & I would sob endlessly as Khan ended her pain. I want that knife in the gut feeling for them. I feel you've been leading up to something groundbreaking. This would be the type of scene to dare the readers not to feel anything. I am not a morbid person to hate HEA's, but if there was ever a story to break my heart it would be this. You write with such raw power, I could easily see you bringing it all crashing down. Your writing is beautiful, as always. Have a lovely day!

What would Kirk think of the tests they are running on the augments...?

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Hope they rebel & SOON. The anticipation is killing me. I would love to see their mistreatment of Jakarel, (perhaps having her injured) starting the revolt. Khan's character is so beautifully believable, that I forget that this isn't the original storyline of him. He feels like you've made him your own.

I'm dying for the next update. I don't care if it makes me sound pathetic...I check every day for any kind of update!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Loving it all. Keep on writing, it must be pretty good. Because we're all still here! ;)