What a chapter! And what a creep Horton was, eeeuugg! I wouldn’t have blamed Ben for totally killing him but…it’s better that he didn’t.

A very good chap! Lots of intrigue going on. I liked particularly the conversation/interaction in the beginning between Maddy and Ben. Very good idea to have a safe word.
I want to say I’m soooo sorry I haven’t left a review for you in an eon. (;_;’) I’ve been really busy with life but I’m hoping to get back to reading this now! 3

I'm finally catching up and MAN this chapter did not disappoint. You have the tension up to an almost unbearable place! I did love Skye here. She's such a badass. And Ben was rather funny at times.

Well looks like something interesting is going on with this Ken Horton character. I wonder what’s up with him? Of course this probably was part of the show but like I say I don’t remember anything XD

Very nice chapter :')

Very good chapter. I liked it very much.

What a night for Ben XD poor guy. Running around in the jungle beating up dinos? That’d scare me shitless XD

Did you come up with that little go away spider song? It was really sweet! Songs are hard to have in stories, but you made it work!

Aw, this was cute! :3

Oooooooh, me likey some Karl Urban. XD Hadn’t imagined Ben looking like that. Very nice indeed.
This was a very nice bio! Really lays out the character well. I bet it helps you keep track of all the characters quirks and characteristics. I really should do that for my characters from Oompa Loompa Takeover… U_U It would help me remember all the stuff I sometimes forget. Maybe I’m lazy haha, or more likely think I can remember it all without writing it down (cocky XD)

This was a well written chapter. :) I completely understand Josh's anger and frustration, so I'm glad you dealt with it in this chap. Sometimes just being the sibling that no one is noticing or caring about (seemingly because attention is so focused on the other sibling's problems) is enough to cause some serious upset.
Probably a good thing that Ben is getting his own place, away from all the thirsty women in the barracks lol! You do a good job with the ladies dialogue. :')
I can't wait to see what Smythe has planned! What is he cooking up in that head of his? And man he's a great actor...
I'm glad for Kono and Alicia!

A very well written chapter. Maddy's troubled spirit rung so true to me.

“This is so southern,” he thought.
I laughed! XD So true! I know cuz I live there hahaha

Well well…
Taylor really needs to clear his damn computer screen every once in awhile instead of letting everyone in TN know that the Shannon family’s been f’d with lol. XD
Ben and Jim’s reactions, especially Jim’s, seemed a bit odd. But I guess they were just really emotional and angry (which is understandable) and just got violent about it. Which could happen. This all would be a really hard thing for a family to deal with.

I really like Ben’s answer to Reilly. “I’m no hero, just an asshole that’s become really good at cheating death, at the expense of others usually.” It really speaks of the way he feels and is true (the expense of others) Never heard any character or person say it this way and I like it.
As for the rest of this chapter…DAMN! XD Shakin things up big time! Ben is Maddy’s dad? What a twist! How the heck did they get Elisabeth pregnant tho? I don’t know if I want an answer omg. O_O
Well done sir! This is what writing is all about!