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Lovely piece with some nice moments, like the "tendrils" of darkness.

There were a few moments I thought were overelaborated for a dying girl, such as "which he had used to shoot at me"- the sentence ending "gun" would be stronger and we'd still get the meaning, I think :) I like the text in bold, but the bold itself is a little hard on the eyes. Perhaps just italics? Your mileage may vary. Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed it x