w I love this

hiiiiiyaaaaa! soo cuteee! conty conty!

Ahahaha. It looks like trouble for Izaya. He just had to jump into Shizuo's case, right? What an odd person.
And hurray for Shizuo - The future debt collector! Still have no idea how he could cope with Izaya though.
At the end of the chapter, I imagined Shizuo bursting through Izaya's door and threatened to beat the life out of him. After all, they are 'neighbors'.

This is really interesting! I would like to see what happens next :D

GAH! *flips table*
I knew that Izaya is up to no good. In stories like this, people would usually jump into "let's-get-along" type of relationship while destroying everything in between. But you didn't do that. You made Izaya play another one of his games, bringing out the famous chess pieces.

Oh dear... the poor poor building

Nice try girl,here some chocolate for your hard work!
I simply loved the joke about the over-cheery doctors with needles and the idea behind the story is good.(_)b
But if you allow me, I would like to advice you to use break lines whenever you change a characters viewpoint or when there is a time helps comprehend the text easier.
Anyway hope youll update soon,till then take care and keep writing!(_)/

alifgbvad;fa;asdm Oh my! What a great fic!
I can't believe how awesome this fic escalated. And this is only the first chapter!
And... Is it me or did you have a typo in the fic's title? Or is it supposed to be like that?
Anyhow, this is a lovely story! You made everything simple to read, at the same time, doing it beautifully. Can't wait for the next chapter!