| Reviews for xanatos crash |
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   Whack-the-beetle chapter 2 . 2/11/2017 This is so great, very nicely written and I love this unusual and new idea for a plot. Please do continue at some point, I'd love to read more of that! |
| Aurora Kemanche chapter 2 . 6/6/2015 Forever sadden that there are only two chapters of this. |
| Tamha chapter 2 . 8/30/2014 I can't help but wonder with Sarah why Toby would make that wish at all. Implies some larger issue outside of Toby being obviously obsessed with Jareth, thinking it's cool or whatever having a fairy godfather. Also, the reordering of time at the end of chapter one was absolutely brilliantly executed. |
| TheKitchenMistress chapter 2 . 7/5/2014 Hi. Just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed the beginning of this story. Interesting premise/plot idea - one that I've not seen before. Thanks for writing. |
| scipio96 chapter 2 . 12/21/2013 Please keep writing! :D |
| the only daughter of Pluto chapter 2 . 11/28/2013 lovely story I cant wait to see what happens!:) |
| Dragoon-Yue chapter 2 . 8/17/2013 Well, now... I hope that nothing bad happens to Irene... And I hope that you update this soon! |
| FarGreenCountrySwiftSunrise chapter 2 . 7/10/2013 Really interesting idea. Interested in learning more. |
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 2 . 7/7/2013 Dang, missed the NW reference. (It was a while ago...) Xanatos - a reference to the Xanatos Gambit, or the fictional mastermind it was named after? Pawn. King. ...The last chapter is going to be along the lines of "Queen", if I'm not mistaken. This is interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter. - Matsuri |
| Opalbrat chapter 2 . 6/27/2013 Can't wait to read more. :) |
| Alotua chapter 2 . 6/6/2013 I'm really liking the Labyrinth kick! I've always thought Sarah and Jareth were interesting characters for fanfiction, and I love your spin on them! And Toby is interesting here as well; I'm curious to see why he made that wish. Was he just match making, or does he have some complaint against his parents? And what will happen to Irene that puts her out of commission? I wish to know! |
| xBowiex chapter 2 . 6/6/2013 This ones seems interesting o3o it's not like any others I've read so far I like it keep on writing :3. |
| Lylabeth 1 chapter 2 . 6/5/2013 One word: Brilliant. Another word or two : Great writing. |
| Kaytori chapter 2 . 6/5/2013 Awesome fic so far. Does Toby not like his parents why he'd try to wish them out of his life like that? |
| etcetera nine chapter 2 . 6/5/2013 Jareth would be picky about his tea, wouldn't he? (And he totally has a way with children.) Would love to know how he ingratiated himself into her family :) I feel like Toby is being more manipulative than Jareth normally is, which is fantastic. What a little jerk! (Keep on with the manipulating, Toby!) This is brilliant so far, looking forward to more. |
