Really great crossover, enjoyed it a lot! Wish there was more to read, but great job on this.

Level of trust and - dare I say it - caring between the two grows, though not without some healthy skepticism and dispassion...you're /good/ at this. I look forward to an update, but I can understand if you don't have time or other circumstances get in the way. :)

"Mesmerizingly deep," I liked that. I cannot express my love for adjectives that you wouldn't expect before their nouns enough.
"I rather prefer that you do" - ! *fangirls quietly*
And the comment about Loki being upset about the decorum. He would, he so would!
Jim would totally describe the Enterprise as awesome. That adjective was what first clued me in to the perspective change.
Oh, Heimdall, yes! I like Heimdall.

*sighs* Being the Khanloki shipper I am, my favorite parts were the rooftop, especially where Loki pulls Khan's hood up, and the bit below the last ###. I just really like the one-touches-the-other-in-a-more-familiar-way-than-the-other-is-expecting-and-the-other-is-unnerved trope. Not in a dubcon way. But like you did. I also really love Loki touching Khan's hair. For some reason.

Bones and Kirk are both very in character. "Unique" eyebrows, I liked that.
Ohhh, this whole chapter...Khan's escape, the crash, more futuristic Starfleet Europe.../the last couple paragraphs/, holy crap...I love this story so much. :D

Starfleet inhabiting Asgard? Nooooo. No nooo no nope. (This is my reaction against Starfleet, and not against your writing, which is still brilliant.) Yeah, I don't like Starfleet now.
I absolutely /love/ how you juxtaposed the legends in italics with what Loki finds in the history (book?) thing.
Ohhh, parallel universe! Nice!
And yes, I am interpreting that as dork!Benedict. I really didn't expect Loki to accept his offer.

Loki in Starfleet-era London? Brilliance! Oh, now I want to write something to that effect myself, if only for the opportunity to play with Starfleet's influence on England...hmmm...
Okay, that whole part before the first ### break turned me on /way/ more than it should have. Holy. Wow. Please tell me that was your intention. Because you have succeeded.
And I love how Khan and Loki are kind of running around London not caring much about the people supposedly after them. It seems like something they'd do.

I /loved/ the line "woefully colored yellow shirt," it was very clever. Your Loki is very in character, as well.

I'm a really recent addition to the (teeny tiny) Loki/Khan fandom, but I can tell this is going to be amazing! I love the first chapter so much, your writing flows so well!

Great story! I'm curious what happens next. I am also well aware of the fact that it has been a while since your last update, but if you're bored and have some time left, please continue!

nice

Really good :)

Hola! Cuándo vas a actualizar?

Espero que pronto :)

Muchos saludos!

I love the story and how well you mesh the two story's together :)

cool. this is.. so mad but rad/