Nice work XD.

You could have builded up more tention and only make Sabo reveal himself while saving Luffy from Akainu. Just my opinion. [This message is approved by the Trapezimessiah].

I thought Sabo had a memory loss.

Loved this:-)

Nicely done, good characterizations and an interesting progression. Definitely one of the better Sabo at Marineford stories. You could use some editing though as there are a lot of run-on and fragmented sentences in this. You also tend to use metaphors in areas where they aren't really adding anything to the scene, and those tend to be some of the more confusing sentences in this story. Overall though, very good story and I greatly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing and posting!

It's cute I love it
Keep on the writes

Three hours late... Is that supposed to be a Naruto reference?

I can just imagine Sengoku turning to Garp and bellowing, "YOU HAD ANOTHER ONE?!"

This finale is really funny! Hahaha!

This is definitely one of my all time favorite one piece stories now. Thank you so much for sharing it!

I wasn't going to review til the end, but dammit I teared up at the end of this chapter. It was so cute and amazing and just. gah. i love brotherly fluff. you've destroyed me.

funny

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... I CANNOT- IT WAS AMAZING. LOVELY STORY. I LOVE READING IT :DD

BEST STORY EVER! Finally a happy ending! Oh how i wish it actually ended this way... I love your portrayal of Sabo, mature yet still childish. I love the old person joke at the end, hilarious! Great job!

Haha this is amazing! I loved it! I'm so glad they survived and reunited. Thank you for writing this. I was hoping for a sequel but with an ending like that I don't think it's neccessary.
Completely awesome.