This was absolutely brilliant! Its good to see that not even the Doctor and Rose, in all their awesomeness, are perfect. They have flaws as people, and in their relationship. Its' lovely to see that, and it makes them seem approachable, and human( can't really find a better word for it). The TARDIS would of course take her Bad Wolf's side, seeing as she was the only companion to not only look into her heart, but treat her like the sentient being that she is. To most she's just a machine, albeit an intelligent one.
It is good that the TARDIS made him confront and face his feelings for Rose head on. Everyone has to do that at some point, even 900 year old aliens. Its easy to forget that the Doctor's an ancient alien, seeing as he looks and acts so human. I am glad that they did express their insecurites as well as their feeling for each other. The Doctor and Rose are meant to be together. As a final thought, I absolutely love how the Doctor took Rose's hand and said 'let's go home'.

Sigh and Squee! I never Squee.

this was so good! :) I, personally, agree. the doctor will always give Rose a second chance... I mean, it was obvious

This was sooo cute and well written! I love it! Thanks for writing! :)

I love Ten and Rose, and this story was brilliant! When she was going to slap him...I laughed out loud imagining The Doctor regenerating because of a slap from Rose Tyler! Keep writing!

Awww... it took them a while to get there, but they did. Rose and Ten, they can be stubborn. :)

Oh, that was a lovely story. I especially loved the first half, so well written. And the ending was sweet. Very nicely done.

Wow, just WOW!
I got completely lost in this to the point when i got to the last line I was looking for the next button for chapter 2!

I can honestly say I am impressed with your portrayal of both Rose and the Doctor, it was Ggritty yet realistic, but pulled at the heart in all the right ways.
I look forward to seeing any future work you write.

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This is lovely! I could completely see this moment happening, heartbreaking though it was, though well worth it for the reconciliation. You caught their speech and mannerisms so beautifully, and I really appreciate the flow and expressiveness of your writing. Please post more! :)

Lovely! Nice characterization of Ten and Rose. Keep writing!

Cute! Impressed that it's only your first time, just some grammatical mistakes!

The first time you post something, it can be nerve racking. But this is brilliant. Hopefully there will be more stories coming from you.