I really don't see the appeal everyone has with this, i found too many flaws that ruined the experience for me, honestly the human is so BLAND, no personality. And certain aspects have no logic behind them. Maybe it gets better but i can't press on..

Nooooo! It ended. Why did it have to end? Anyway all over emotional outbursts aside, I really liked this story. It is very well written, and tuggs at one's heartstrings often.

Let me say this to start, this story was fairly enjoyable! This story (neck crack) has made me cry! Yosh, this story has had quiet the emotional climax. Can I read the sequel, can't hear your answer! This story reeled me in. An advent, above all.

"TAKING THE LOOT AND THE GIRL, K THX BYE"
Great story

It looks like the vote's already in, but I'll add my two cents anyway: a story of this caliber defiantly deserves a sequel, especially if you already have new ideas for their adventures on Earth, which I would very much like to read about. Well done on this tale good sir!

i agree , sequel.

I will admit there are some parts that confused me, but that's just me. The pace of the story is just right, there were a few minor grammar errors here and there, nothing that gravely affected the story. Also, I liked the idea of the Void and the Inner Council, very original in my opinion. Actually, I liked many things, such as Fearbane becoming a part of his body and his ability to create objects with the use of his mind and the void sand. All in all, if I had to give the story a rating, I would give it a 7.4.

Side note: I have to say that cliffhanger at the end of the story is very useful, we readers got a happy ending and you got an opportunity to write a sequel. Anyways, it's your decision if you want to write a sequel, it's your story, right? Although, if you decide to write a sequel: take your time and relax, nobody wants to write a story while under great pressure and stress, right?

Extra side note: Have you ever heard of FIMFiction? If not you should check it out; it's like FanFiction, only it has My Little Pony stories and crossovers (My Little Pony crossovers to avoid confusion) instead of stories from every franchise. I recommend trying to make an account and posting your story there, It'll increase the amount of readers you have. Although it's your decision if you want to do it, nobody's forcing or pressuring you.

YES YES YES YES O GOD YES!

YOU MADE ME CRY! I'M CRYING AS I'M WRITING THIS! SEQUEL OR DIE! And hurry please! PLEASE!¡

Dude this is amazing. I love the ending where he just jumps right through the portal. Keep up the good work. brohoof

Yes make a sequel this story is too amazing to just stop

Even tho I don't watch mlp anymore(cuz I left the herd, I think) this fanfic is the only thing that still keeps me wondering if I left the herd or not, this is the best fan fic, I have ever read, that's mlp, but I also like the lost element but I don't read it anymore, but this, I love it!, I will love to see a sequel, keep going my friend, and bro hoof to y'all.(yeah, I still got it, mabey I'm still in the herd)

This is definitely a keeper. I loved it from start to finish and I cannot wait till the sequel!

Beautiful way to end the story. I this has been a very refreshing take on mlp, not all the main characters being paragons of goodness and instead making them slightly unlikable. I definitely believe there should be a sequel as you left a bit of a cliffhanger in my opinion. Humans fought against dreamers? Was there a splintering among them? If so, then why were both banished? Did Celestia turn them against each other or was there a larger scheme at hand. Sorry for making this so long, but your story was amazing and I sincerely hope you continue it.

This is easily my favorite fanfiction, I Hate to see it end so soon DEFINITELY DO A SEQUEL, it was extremely well written very enjoyable the right amount of emotion and action blended in to make one hell of a fine story. The characterers actions were reasonably believable if you get past talking ponies. I say you could probably do well professionally making story's. I absolutely loved this one and ill keep my eyes glued for the sequel. I want to see a duel between dreamer and Celestia.