That was pretty cool! I liked it! Thanks for sharing!

I think Scarlet is more like Beauty and The Beast. Mostly cause belle looks for her father when she finds the horse and then she meets beast and yea

Well, I'm pretty sure you've read Cress. But if you haven't (if you don't want spoliers, don't read)

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Loved this!

I see Wolf as a mixture od the Huntsman and the Big Bad Wold in Little Red Ridding Hood. Because he was sent to kill her, but tricks the evil queen, and helps her escape. But, he is also the Big Bad Wolf because he tricks Scarlet in the beginning, genetically modified Lunar or not he's still totally a werewolf and werewolf to me equals wolf equals Big Bad Wolf, and his name.
I really wish actually happened in the book.

This is a really nice story. You did a great job keeping both Kai and Cinder in character, and for the most part the grammatical stuff was good :) I would like to note, though, that you had a lot of very long sentences, especially towards the beginning of the story; they sounded a little bit awkward to me. You might want to go back and read your story out loud to see where those are.

I liked it, and I hope to read more from you in the future :D

-Firestorm N.

That was simply wonderful! I hope u make this into a series, its defs worth it :3 i wonder what the press conference was for? Hmmm... Anyways, awesomeness is all i think of to describe this story! Hope you update :)

I like it! Is the point supposed to be that she just doesn't want him to know? Anyways, can't wait for Cress and if you have any other fanfics out there! :)

Awesome! I LOVED it!

A good story. Having Dr. Erland hide a storage chip in Cinder's new hand is a clever idea. Cinder's strength, irony and love for Kai come through very well in her message, and his reaction (deciding to "do his own protecting") is very in-character.