Loved it

Your world has treasure hunts, alchemy potions, and magic rituals. Loads of fun and very different

Much more believable coverup

Thanks for sparing us an unnecessary death.

This kid is a go getter. Love how he got the potion samples

Nice touch with Godfather ritual.

Love ease of conversation.

What a great set of changes.

Thanks for not playing Sirius as a total idiot. People overplay it to make him look stupid. Most ignore the PTSD

Nice work with tent.

Love the potions (both properties and outcome).

Nice switch up to tournament and ball.

Ginny needs to get put in her place

So nice.

Years after reading books, I determined Luna was the best.

Nice job with the tasks.

Love how he continually buries Snape.

Hoping he takes a guy to the dance

Letter was great and poignant.

I hope Harry can avoid the heartbreak of losing him

Torn about how they shut Draco down. As a lesbian who struggled with orientation (now 57), I remember cringing when I slipped up.

Still it’s hard to sympathize with a racist little shit.

Great he now has friends he can trust

Very cool.

I get his unwillingness to trust adults. His frustration with Hermione and Ron make sense. But understand, Harry would have died multiple times without Hermione. Makes epilogue all the worse. Harry didn’t need to end with Hermione but Ginny is poor substitute. And pairing Hermione with Ron was literary sabotage. Still it spawned fan fiction.

Try to work Luna a little sooner. Not a romantic partner but a friend.

Interesting reaction.

I hope it makes Harry realize he needs to live in every minute

Fascinating even without the background