Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

After this I can't lie to my self anymore.
Power trip crossover storys are my Biggest Guilty Pleasures.
This was a pretty fun story and every chapter was intresting.
Some twist were clever some were cliche but I enjoyed the whole ride.

love this story so much I keep coming back to it to re-read it! its AWESOME!

the moment you portrayed ville valo as handsome, that's it, I'm done

And dropped. This seriously nonsensical bull.

Today the demon will be executed for harming the future ruler of the leaf village."

when I saw this retarded line I knew it was about to get ridiculous and I was quite obviously right.

Naruto went down too easily leading to the pierce.

The sasuke reject simply walking away and not reveling in his victory or ripping him apart or anything after piercing him seems off.

Just runs him through then goes to walk off.

I enjoyed your story so much that I'll have to call it...
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A FAIL! but only because of the grammar.
The story was Awsome though! I'd like to trade notes with you if I ever decide to write a fanfiction.

I remember when a 720i (720p was more expensive) 50 inch plasma was like $1000 USD. Thats even more expensive where I'm from. Just recently I bought a LG ultra 4k smart tv for about $300 USD.

Dude, that's totally kaguya, but she looks different. The only person it could have possibly been is kaguya anyway.

Umm. How was that funny? Not trying to be rude, but I really didn't get it at all...

Saying "I may not but what happened" confused the hell out of me. Anyone with decent grammar would be

Let me guess... Ahri gets a smoochum?

Ville Valo is definitely not handsome, idk what you are smoking but you need to get your eyes checked

i think you make a mistake suzumebachi. kiba, shino, hinata and naruto meet her and her clan as they search the same bug. this happens after sasuke leave konoha. but at your story sasuke leave konoha never and with this team 8 shouldn't meet suzumebachi and her clan.

great story.