| Reviews for Seeing You With Open Eyes |
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ssl71 chapter 7 . 11/17/2016 I love this Callen/Kensi fic! Love how they say "you see me" to each other... it speaks volumes. |
MalleablePlague chapter 7 . 9/28/2015 Great story, love the CaKe (Callen/Kensi) paring. The ending was great with Kensi turning to Callen. I hope you write more Callen and Kensi stories. Dreamer |
Allison Diamond chapter 7 . 7/15/2014 Wonderful, just wonderful. This is the first Callen/Kensi fic I've read, and I'm hooked. It's great that the characters remain themselves. Callen has a hard time accepting physical emotions/returning them, so thanks for showing that. Kensi is headstrong, and this story kept that. These two really - mostly Callen - had a hard time accepting these new feelings. Who knows where it might take them in the future? Great story, but there were minor grammatical errors. |
LCDRFireFly chapter 7 . 6/30/2014 You had me in tears with this end. Absolutely perfect story! Thank you so much for sharing! |
LCDRFireFly chapter 4 . 6/30/2014 This story is amazing! It's the best Callen/Kensi story I've read so far... " 'You see me.' (...) it might be Deeks (...) but in the end it makes sense that it is Callen she turns to, has been him all along. " had me almost in tears. This is so beautifully written, I am at a loss for words. Thank you for sharing this unique piece of art! |
mylove24 chapter 7 . 10/30/2013 I love this pairing. Loved the story. I can read and keep rereading this story. |
Halle Alexis chapter 7 . 9/30/2013 This was a really wonderful story and I loved it! |
Halle Alexis chapter 4 . 9/30/2013 You write the characters flawlessly and I love them more and more every chapter. |
Halle Alexis chapter 2 . 9/30/2013 I love how you're writing the relationship between Kensi and Callen so well and still keeping that strong dynamic between Kensi and Deeks, too. It's more realistic for me and I'm really enjoying the story! |
Halle Alexis chapter 1 . 9/29/2013 I really enjoyed this first chapter! You wrote the characters and the plot incredibly well and I can't wait to read more! |
mkfanfiction chapter 7 . 9/8/2013 Wow! This is hands down, the best Callen/Kensi fic I've ever read. You are a fantastic writer, and you write the characters so well it's unbelievable. Most CaKe stories are too short and way to direct about their feelings for each other, but I absolutely love how the suspense and feelings build throughout the course of the story. One last thing, haha. I love how you ended the story with Callen going to sleep. (I'm gonna guess that it was symbolic of the fact that he was finally happy and at peace, so it kind of represented a new beginning.) Anyway, AMAZING job(: -Marissa |
geminigurl89 chapter 7 . 9/2/2013 Great story! I love this pairing. |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/25/2013 wow, that fic was fantastic! |
AnUnfortunateMistake chapter 7 . 8/10/2013 Very nice. Great work. |
moviefanatic17 chapter 1 . 7/14/2013 Wow... Can I say it again? WOW! This story (in fact, just this chapter since I'm still reading) is absolutely awesome. Have no fear, there are still some Callen/Kensi fans out here and this story of yours has reminded me of exactly why I am such a fan. There is something so attractive about their almost 'forbidden' relationship that it just makes you want to imagine these two hooking up (not to mention the great tension and chemistry the actors give us). You have a real gift for writing convincing, realistic scenes that aren't out of the realm of possibility for either character. I guess what I'm saying is, great job and keep it up! |