| Reviews for Nadia Gilbert |
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   ThePhantomismyLove chapter 18 . 10/15/2017 Please write more |
| yazzy97 chapter 1 . 8/9/2017 Love your story. Still waiting for an update |
| Dyany chapter 2 . 9/3/2016 This is the best fanfiction with Ariana Grande and The Vampire Diaries! I LOVE IT! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/10/2016 ~This is a little bit of a flame~ why do you keep repeating her three sizes?! Like in a limeish situation it might be okay you know to lead up to it, but every other time it is completely irrelevant and irritating! Like there is NO POINT to it! I like the idea and stuff behind this fanfic BUT poor execution. If this is Ur first time or you have no beta or english is not the main language that you speak (which I think is not the case) it would be completely understandable soo yea... ~End flame~ I was happy ish to find that Nadia is a lot like me. I'm like same the height and size as her long hair, only 1 year older and yea a ~Rainy-Round~ |
| One-Step-From-Hell chapter 18 . 7/20/2015 Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| PaulinaDragona chapter 18 . 7/13/2015 I like your fiction. |
| lozza ld chapter 18 . 4/21/2015 i love this story! :) |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/22/2015 You seem obsessed with you character's 32c chest. It is mentioned every chapter at least once. |
| Skyeward MusicLover chapter 18 . 3/8/2015 great chapter 18. plz update the story |
| DGfleetfox chapter 4 . 3/1/2015 For future reference, describing parts of your character's body like this "crossed my arms over my 32 C chest" and "felt my oval face" is very unnecessary and disturbs the flow of your story. It would sound much better if you wouldn't add descriptives in that manner. Crossed my arms over my best, or felt my face - that is normal and reads naturally. |
| pinklips90 chapter 18 . 1/9/2015 Awesome story! |
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/8/2015 I love your story. It shines light on new aspects of the story and lets new developments occur. That said, you need to work on your descriptions. I swear, if you use "my full lips," "her oval shaped face," "dark brown eyes" or "32C chest," one more time I'll tear out my hair. I get that your trying to be descriptive but change it up a little. Why not try, "I ran my fingers through my tangled hair," or "I played with a loose strand of hair that had fallen from my bun." For eyes try "tired" or "dry". Lips works the same, instead of saying "I bit my full lips" try "I chewed on my bottom lip," or " I wet my chapped lips." Try not to mention the size of her chest at all unless describing cloths. Just don't use any description twice in a chapter. Try to evoke different emotions with you descriptions that tell what Nadia is feeling at the time. I hope I've helped you and not offended you. |
| grapejuice101 chapter 18 . 1/8/2015 Ooo I love it! Please update |
| Red05 chapter 18 . 1/8/2015 Loved it ;-) great job |
| bboops20 chapter 1 . 1/5/2015 wow brill |
