Hector baking food that's safe for consumption? Who knew?

Nice to see him succeed at something, though.

It is so cute and sweet that can give me diabetes!
Lovely

Haha, this was so cute and funny! XD XD

Oh my goodness xD that was a delicious- I mean well cooked story :D!

I like the humor! And who would suspect Hector baking!
The idea was really good, too.

The only problem is the few spelling errors, but I throughly enjoyed you story xD

So cute, loved the ending!

The only way to a... WOMAN'S heart is food?

This was SO CUTE. And funny. You did a really good job of making it hilarious, but not going completely nuts with the jokes. It's not an easy balance to strike; I've failed before, many others have as well. At least this is a winner!

Florina is really sweet here. She just has this thing about her that can't help but make you smile every time you read about her, or at least in this story. Hector's awesome too. Heck, everyone's great! Well done!

Why can't someone make ME cupcakes?!
10/10 Woo hoo!