the Mouse hint was a nice touch

great chapter!

mmmmh so no Irikah backstory? intriguing!

interesting AU, got me hooked

Gangleader Shepard is absolutely fantastic, even before we get to Thane's involvement.

I was expecting this to be a semi-prelude to Stars Fade, I'm surprised. Pleasantly or not, I'm unsure.
It's very well written though, I look forward to catching up.

I love this story, please continue its really good :)

Your characters are wonderfully portrayed as always, and interesting to read. I'm always excited to see one of your updates.

This chap was real good, I hope ur writing more really soon. How long till thane and shepard meet and get together ? I hope u keep writing your real good. Keep it up and good luck

Really engrossing stuff! Hope you decide to continue it sometime.

i really like the dynamic youve set up between shep and anderson, shame he had to be crippled for it to work out though

i hope everyones favorite scientist salarian gets the screen time he deserves, while races defined by one character leave a bad taste in my mouth the salarians couldent have a better representative then mordin

leng needs to die painfully and it would be a nice turnabout if it were to happen at thanes hands

its good to see why jack didnt tell she about the whole subject zero thing, and better to see captain baily pulling a javair

about time we heard from thane, i guess that perfect memory has him rather distracted

nice to see a shep smart enough to stay behind the lines and send out the squads of comandos that she has laying around, just because you can lead the ground team doesnt mean you should shep