UPPPPPDATTTTEEEEEEEE

To the jackass reviewer behind me stfu.
And to the writer great story I hope you continue to write and not let bad reviews get to you.

Ah-HAH! I KNEW Anaklusmos14 wouldn't come up with such a lame idea~

OMG I LOVE DIS STORYTY ALL I GOTS TO SAY IS MOAAAAARRR MOAAAAARRR

and unsatisfying*

The story is moving too quickly and it's unnatural an in satisfying to read. Sorry but that's my opinion

"It seemed somewhat iron they called boys arrogant", iron needs to be changed to ironic please. Just before the flashback thing, it's "As she continued the story, he zoned out and faded into the bitter memories." You forgot the comma and I think it's into, not 'in to'. After the "End Flashback" thing, Zeus was 'forced' to back down, not force to back down. I might have missed a few things so maybe check the chapter again?

Great story continuation!

Anaklusmos is a pretty good writer. Not perfect, but definitely good. That said, I despise his habit of overlapping the end of the previous chapter onto the beginning of the next one. It's incredibly frustrating to have to skip the first bit and find where the old ends and the new begins.

It’s an amazing story so far (only up to chapter 4) I would hate it if Percy was like... OH I GOT ZOE BACK K TIME TO DROP EVERY FUCKING GRUDGE I HELD FOR THE PAST HUNDREDS OF YEARS LOL. But in all seriousness (this is going to be my rant now so sry) like one thing isn’t going to change Percy mind, even if it is the love of his life. Still, amazing story though.

Zeus: you think a mortal can challenge the might of the gods
Me: uh yeah look what Kratos did in three games first one did their service l, second one: Zappy banished him to hell, third one: wiped out the Greek pathanon

updatr

Will Percy ever forgive Hera?

update!

Thuke or thaluke

please update