Why do your sentences split in half and go onto another paragraph?

I know this story is pretty old now but I've just discovered it and devoured it in less than 24 hours and I just thought I'd let you know that it's one of my favourite Jonathan Crane diva of all time. There are a select few different ways that his character seems to be written in five and the way you've written him in this is one of my all time favourite portrayals. I also like your OC - so many of them seem to hit the slightly too try hard note and yours really doesn't. 8 was a bit dubious about him being with someone so young but because of how emotionally stunted he is and how well you wrote it, it seemed totally natural. Great job and if you've stopped writing this forever, thanks for writing as much as you did :-)

OMG please update! This is absolutely the best Scarecrow story I've read. Don't stop here, darling! :)

Yes, Jonah is strangely stable despite everything... I totally get Ava's feeling.

I could totally love both Jonah and Scarecrow too. *sighs dreamily* And btw darling, your JonathanXScarecrow dialogues are the best I've seen so far. :)

Powerful chapter.

Oh my, I'm utterly hooked! This is deliciousssssss.

Wow this is really intriguing! However did she manage to fool Dr Crane?

will you be adding any more to this story any time soon? :( it's sooooo good...i think this is my third time reading it 3

That last chapter is the best you've done and reminded me completely of why I loved your writing so much.

(Hi, hope you remember me after the name change, if not check your pm box!)

Yeah, the interactions flowed well. But it was how well you delved into Ava and Johnathan's minds here that really show how skilled and thoughtful a writer you are. Its really how a writer can prevent a kiss of death Mary Sue.

Really like this definitely one of the better Jonathan oc stories

I'm glad this story isn't turning out to be a big smutfest and actually has a plot. I don't read it, so if the story were, that'd be a problem for me.

So, did your Jonathan kill Sherry Squires? Sounds like he might have.

No, don't be a bag of dicks! This chapter was all creepy, from masks, scarecrows and poems.

Tread carefully in your representation of these disorders, please. I have family members diagnosed with Borderline Personality Disorder, and none of them go around murdering people. I know that this isn't a fault of poor research or anything... If Ava didn't have this whole mysterious killing complex, you'd lose a layer of suspense, I get that.

But if you're going to diagnose characters, make sure that you tell people what does and doesn't fit the diagnosis so there is no confusion- in A/Ns if not in the story's text, please. I know this story doesn't count as something that is representing real research, but people are impressionable. They get the idea that all schizophrenics are extremely dangerous people because they saw a few as serial killers on some tv show- the only times we ever seem to see schizophrenics portrayed in media. Which is really unfair to schizophrenics, don't you think?

Please, take what I'm saying into consideration. It is a big and very personal deal to me. Thank you. :)