aahh! It is really unfair that this is a oneshot. I would have loved to hear about their little tiff... or how the rest of the school reacted to the new and improved Harry, especially after Harry's name came out of the goblet. Or how Sirius reacted, can he get harry out? SO MUCH QUESTIONS! anyway, love your story :)

I really like the new and improved Sirius.

This is BRILLIANT!

This is most interesting! I love all the Black brothers' background story and the loving interaction between Sirius and Regulus. As well as Harry's pureblood education! Was Ron jealous in the birthday party cause of it? Hope you'll write about why their fight happened! I am most curious! Fourth-year!Ron was not a favorite of mine for sure! And Draco? Will get he his wish and become Harry's friend? Hope poor Regulus will be overlooked by Voldie when the Dark Lord returns! Him and Evangeline and his little family are so beautiful! I do not want bad things happening to them! Anyhow, good tale. I cannot wait for the next installment!

Well, it's a nice start, and an interesting premise … you don't normally get Sirius and Regulus. Though the nicknames they use for each other is weird.

But I, um, seriously think you need to proofread your chapters. Once more if you've already done it.

Cause some of the mistakes … no offence, but I don't know whether to laugh or cry!

A good example would be:
Quote:"Either talk or I'm living!":End Quote

I think you meant to say "leaving" cause otherwise it sounds like Sirius is going to commit suicide the minute Regulus starts talking!

Also, I think you meant to say "sail" instead of "sale"

Other than that, the story is nice.

I wonder why Sirius kept the Horcrux a secret …

Or did he tell Dumbledore?