None too impressed. Why read an episode of the show? I've seen it and I don't need you to re-run it for me. Not only are you copying the work of the guy who wrote the episode, you're too lazy to come up with something original to "hook" your readers, which means you just can't or that you just won't be bothered to write anything for the characters that you claim to enjoy so much. Ether way, it's just not right! How can you write so much and do almost nothing original for the best pair of characters in the entire series?

The part about how they age, falls flat for One reason. And that is that the Digimon are basically evolved Versions of their respective Species.

It's like saying Humans have short lifespans because Gorillas only live to Forty. Humans are more than capable of Living far longer than most animals.

Also, You buggered up the Fox part. It's not Forty. It's Fourteen, maximum, since wild foxes Barely live for Two years, Five being a massive stretch. If you saw the Forty years part, that was the length of the Breeding Program to breed Domestic Foxes.

And even then, you are forgetting the fact that, again, these are not only digimon, they also have the Traits of Humans. What's to say they won't live as Long as a Human being?

Pardon Me for the Rant, but that just bugged me. The ending felt like it was just an excuse to Seperate the Tamers from their partners anyway, with a few willing to risk it, keeping their partners.

...a lot of this chapter already happened.

Surprised there are so few review for this story. its quite good, sure it has some odd spots, like repeating the part of trying to convince Column to infiltrate Hypnos, but still, overall a good story. Might look at the sequel now.

'"He's gonna yiff all her digivolutions".

"Terriermon!"

"Moumentai!"'

I fucking lost it.

Did not expect an OC evolution.

My poor sweet innocence. I can never read fanfiction again.

And here in chapter 16 when Renamon talks to impmon, it is revealed that renamon specializes in the art...Of trolling.

...Rika...God what a bitch. After Renamon gave so much for her, Rika just basically said "fuck you, I'm going with this guy. You know, if you put the word 'bitch' in a dictionary and put Rika's face beside it, yeah it would make a lot of sense. Just like in the show.

I got to admit Lilithmon is HOT...but her arm ruins things so bad...Laylamon fixes this a lot :)

Alice need some luv...poor girl...I've never really seen a fiction where she gets a lead role...And honestly I wonder about Alice x takato...it'd be cute. Or Alice x ruki.o.o hardass girl has to soften up because of broken goth girl...kawaii...

Ruki has done too much bad shit for her to be forgiven. She willingly betrayed Renamon for Icedevilmon, Destroyed all kinds of would be digimon partners, and finally gave up everything to become Lilithmon, and killing Leomon. Only things I can see happening is 2 ways. Ruki gets deleted, (Not sure if a Human gets deleted will they turn into a Digimon egg?) Or she goes back to the human world with nothing and watched as everyone fights off the D-reaper. All I know is that she can not be redeemed.

She seems to be the exact copy of Darkwargreymon from D2 and Beelzemon, but both of those 2 could be redeemed easily enough. Ruki was just too evil for that to happen here.

...honestly say he shoulda thrown ruki into the sky, then impaled that lance straight up her ass.(Kinky in lilithmon form actually...thatd be...wow.)

Impmon digivolves to devimon

...And sexy just entered the plot.