I think the story was interesting! Even if it have some ooc, the topic was fun and enjoyable, thank you 3

I prefer if they were more in character, but to be honest this version of them is not bad either. It's different but still good.

Interesting. This plot is intrigueing. Well done.

It's okay. Your quantity is fueling this couple's fanfiction. Been on a reading binge for all your fics so thanks for that (: on ffnet, i think ya wrote around 5% of the total fics for Kaishin/Shinkai. And hooray for those on ao3 too. Thanks again for your stories and putting these two in so many fun scenarios!

You know Apollo is god of music, poetry, art, oracles, archery, plague, medicine, sun, light and knowledge..
And I can't see a greek god without thinking about Percy Jackson :p

Cute

Rushed, but happy ending! Yay! At least you finish your stories!

This was a great story and I loved the ending!

Aw yeah, awesome story build up with an cheese ending! But now I really wanna know what manga this concept came from... Care to tell? _ the way they meet is really original (like the reason Shinichi seeks Kaito out) and I love that Shinichi comes in to fix Kaito's life up, and it's funny to watch Kaito act like such a tsundere for a lot of the beginning. The stuff they say about love and how they compare it to sleep and other things was also surprisingly deep! Great job and thanks for posting!

Oh. I didn't realize it was over until you said it in your author's note. Well, huh. I feel like it was a fairly simple ending. Nothing to extraordinary about it, which makes me sad. I'm warming up to it, though. BUT I really did like all of this. You did a wonderful job. I can't wait to read more of your work. Seriously! This was great.

This was awesome! I love the story so much! I loved the descriptions of love as well and what the story was about!

You're right, the ending was kinda iffy. I like the rest of it, though! So, not your best work, but by no means bad. Really. Besides, all the rest of your writing is so fantastic I think you're entitled to have a slightly let-down-ish ending at least this once. I love you, by the way.
:)

aaaaand now i've officially read all of your stories so far and i'll stop bothering you. throughout the whole story i thought it was 'enamored with', but after looking it up, i saw that 'enamored of' is right... huh. sounds strange and i'm sure i've read it with the wrong preposition more often than with the right one. or it could just be because it's 'in love with'... non-native speaker here, even if i've been learning and speaking the language for 15 years now.

loved the story even though i was skeptical about the host business. thanks for sharing!

Ending was not all that "shitty" as you put it, considering EVERY other fanfic that exists in this universe. I thought it was quite appropriate actually.
And now that my tiny insignificant critique is out of the way, on the more important stuff.
OMFG SO MUCH LOVE FOR THE HOST!AU!KAITO AND HOST!AU!SHINICHI ASKDHASKJLHDLASKJDHLASD.
xD

This is the END?! NO!

*dies in a hole*

Crescent T.