This is brilliant. Just amazing and I love how you found a loop hole and went with it! Hope you are well, buy my gosh this is my fav doctor who fic ever!

Rose: The drums? You mean that Dum-Dum-Dum-Dum that keeps drowning out the music?
Master: ... you can hear it?!
Rose: It is VERY loud.
Doctor: It's also supposed to be imaginary.
Rose: Is it? Sounds real to me.

I feel a bit misled. I only read complete stories, and this is labeled as complete, but you end it on a cliffhanger, with a sequel that never materialized. It feels like you ran out of ideas and just stopped.

I love this story

I can’t wait for the next story or chapters to this one please update soon

Quite liked this story, right the way up until you had a teleporting Rose that didn't pop off for three seconds and bring Jack over. I mean, I still liked the story, but you seemed to be setting this up for a good ole Jack stand in with the others coming along, but apparently Jack wasn't there. Then you have Rose the time hopper wanting to save the Doctor and... not getting help. Just felt a bit too much of a ham-fisted 'plot says he regenerates here' moment.

That aside it was a very good story, and well written to boot. I had tears in my eyes when Rose said good bye to her family, and I was really happy when they came back with her. You did great getting across the emotional impact of the characters experiences.
-Twy

I just want to thank you for giving Rose the opportunity to fully say goodbye to her family. You handled it beautifully and you showed that she actually did have connections in the parallel world. It’s refreshing to read a fanfic that actually deals with what Rose has in the parallel universe and didn’t just chuck her out without a goodbye. I love this! And the River and Rose relationship is everything!

You are an amazing story teller!
Really looking forward to reading more of this story!

I'm confused, What happened with baby melody?

I know its been awhile since you finished this story... but I hop you return to it. Love it.

gotta know what comes next! come back oh fantastic author!

do love the addition of this chapter. may not be a huge plot point but a fantastic and sweet side note that adds to the feels 3

Didnt he still have that hand that he didnt use bc donna didnt create the meta.

This entire story is amazing. It changed things up and made things different than the show because of the added element of Rose. The ending was great with the Doctor saving Wilf still.

Omg i love everything. Thank you for not killing off Donna and making her happy while allowing Rose and the doctor to travel together