well m8 this was a very interesting take on the master of death trope! I enjoyed reading it and I thank you for sharing the story. I'm sure I will enjoy the rewrite too when it catches up to this.

I like this story alot. Hiwever on this chapter i am pretty confused whybharry lets grima leave with out so.e "additions" or something to make his life misearble or having him die in a week or something. I am also confused as to why harry didnt just kill everyone in isengaurd includeing the people in the cages because really to me it would give them peace. I would rather die them birth those monsters.

Thank you for a brilliant update.

I really like this story. I love the idea behind it, and I've been thoroughly enjoying it. I'm excited to read the revised version.

On a separate note, I have a couple of questions:
Why did Harry leave his sword in Rivendell in the first place? What is its significance in relation to Narsil?
Also, what’s Harry’s deal with Tom Bombadil? (haha, that rhymed. :) ) Really though, what's the story behind that?

Anyway, great job, and thanks for writing. :)

This chapter cracks me up. I love Harry's interactions with Elrond and Glorfindel. The whole polished floor thing is hilarious. It also makes me grin to imagine what Aragorn must think of Harry. I'm really looking forward to seeing how he reacts when he finds out that he knew Harry as an eagle back when he went by Thorongil. Great chapter. I love it. :)

Though you didn't finish this version, I like it nonetheless. I'm gonna read the second version next.

still good maybe a little hasty to put the story on hold? xxxx Kudos xxxx : )

Ok, leeré la otra versión, hasta ahora aquí estaba bien...

We'll, I've never read the original, but I love the newer one you've done. And I'm looking forward towards new chapters :D

I just hope you will finish tje second version. I'd love to read it all to the end.

alright cool thanks for telling us

Can Harry change the size of his Eagle? Otherwise he imploded that poor sods head with the vile look on his face, when he cuffed him with his wing lol.

Hmmm...dude I think it was Legolas and not Glorfindel who saved them... since that Glorfindel guy died before the start of lord of rings... in second age or something... so in present there's no Glorfindel but Legolas... if my memory serves me right...

I wish I read this fic sooner; but then again, if I did, then I'd wait longer for updates... Please update? It was highly entertaining, without turning into the ludicrous. You did well, with the history, the places, the names, the characters, and all. This piece of gem was quite a delight to read. Some authors failed (sometimes failed spectacularly) in trying to deepen their fics using The Silmarillion, but you did it fine; the premis stemmed from a world before Arda, which usually led to the aforementioned spectacular failure, but you managed what others failed to do. :) Well done! And of course, I look forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes out (though I hope not too long). - Rey

Update? Please, This is awesome!