i like it. cute!

this is sooo cute

...chocolate is poison to dogs... xx please be safe xx

OMG. WTF. This is the wrong kind of dramatic for dog life. And when has haku ever showed any sign of intentionally keeping a secret. She literally did nothing wrong. She didnt even try to hide her intelligence (heck in one chapter she tried to show it of). She showed knowledge of things a dog shouldn't know about, like freaking mozart! The only thing she didnt do was outright start trying to write to communicate with them (which she shouldnt have been able to do so easily with her new dog body).
I know you wanted to advance the plot but this literally came out of nowhere. There was absolutely no sign of the Lobelia girls somehow knowing of another world, which there should have being. You dont suddenly bring on previously unimportant and not significant to the plot characters and give them a huge role out of no where when they havent even been at least mentioned in passing before. Not to mention that they just start spouting accussations out of nowhere (and then leave like "we done now, no need to thank us bitches *evil cackling*), which really pisses me off because from what ive read they have no ground to stand on because they have nothing to do with haku. Why would they come because of a dog anyway?! Thats the shittiest excuse ive ever heard.
Also the sudden angst and guilt ridden haku seemed so out of character (from what ive seen of her in the last 6 chapters).
No matter what she was before, Haku is a dog now. In this world she has ALWAYS been a dog. She should have been treated as a dog until something unnatural proved otherwise. The intelligence would have done the job but the hosts seemed to put it off as some quirk and just accepted that their "magical" dog does math and gives advice on things it shouldnt know about sometimes. Jumping from that to "BOOM! Internal and external conflict, the lobella girls know shit, and ohmigosh Haku has been a Lying Liar Who Lies this entire time and is gonna ruin our lives" is just a bit "whoa! Now hold on one sec!"
AND. THEN. IT WAS ALL RESOLVED SOOOO EASILY!
Like. Wtf.
I thought this story was about a girl and how she handles her new dog life. 7 chapters into 41 and shes already got a solution.
I was expecting a new unique story and all i got was a drawn out introduction to another "girl appears in anime world" story.
Maybe, this story gets better and you have this all planned out and I'll feel stupid for this comment later. But now, im not liking how its going.
Also i know that this is already completed but i wanna comment anyway.

...*whispers* depraaaaaaaaaveeeeed...

Wow. The twins must be pretty depraved and lonely if they are acting flirtatious with a bitch (...get it? A female dog. ;).

you don't get bags under your eyes after one sleepless night.

Pretty sure dogs can't blush, and if they could it wouldn't be seen through the fur anyway.

I LOVE your sense of humor! Keep up the good work!

Hablas español? xD Creía que hablabas inglés... me acuerdo de leer el fanfic de His body guard loyal... y dejar review.. creo
Bueno, leeré el siguiente, me dio mucha risa eso de la gitana, siempre empezás los capítulos que dan mucha risa xD. Por lo menos, no tengo que traducir mi review al inglés.

I think it's so cute how accepting Hikaru and Kauru are when finding out their favorite pet dog is actually a human girl. I will definitely enjoy reading the rest of your story once I have the time.

Interesting story so far, but I really feel the need to point out two things. Firstly, chocolate is deadly toxic to canines, and so the choc chip cookie could kill her especially since she is still just a pup. She would get seriously sick. Secondly, she may blush, but they wouldn't be able to see it though the fur, so any bashful behaviour they pick up would be body language only. But I'm enjoying the story regardless, and I look forward to more.

Wow... so after quite a while of going back and forth between this story and a few others, I have finally finished it!...

I have one comment and I do hope you take it into consideration: are you considering rewriting this?

I ask for the fact that how you originally wrote it, up to chapter 40, is very hard to read. This is because the quotation marks are like this: ' 'hi' ' when they should be like this: "hi". It made it hard to read and I almost quit reading because of it; however, I stuck it through because it is a funny story and quite enjoyable, once you get passed this fact. It was also hard to read because there was often a missing word and it made a lot of sentences read incorrectly or not make sense at all... Most of us could make it out though.

I just wanted to pass these thoughts along and it was an enjoyable read. I'm planning on going to read your Black Butler fanfiction here shortly, so until I review again!

All the best to you,

KRW

Hilariously Perfect

Love this story. I hope to read more. I hope to read Alex's other live stories.