I did enjoy this story a lot. I do hope you havent given up on it. :-)

Please don't give up on this!

Marry me! I just can't let someone who writes fics as perfect as this get away!
Kidding -obviously- but I really am loving the history and I hope to read more soon
Please don't tKe long to post the next chapter
Xoxo

I really want to see Khan and/or Kirk kill Elaria's father. Or have them spill the proverbial beans that Elaria is really his daughter.

Good to see you back. Nice work!

this is getting so intense hahaha I love your fic. And the angst is so good!

Loved that little flashback to when Elaria was truly happy. Made me choke up slightly. I'm convinced that Vartik definitely had Rialana killed.

Good work!

Haha! I love it when the Enterprise crew come up with something and find a loophole in every situation

LOL "He let me hit your father."! I've only just discovered this story and I love it! I'm sure everyone tells you to keep writing, so I'm going to join them. I look forward to reading more soon!

Fantastic

I love this story please update as soon as possible :-)

I love this story! I can't wait to read more :)

Love it when Khan is like this

Ahhh it's so nice to see Khan acting like himself... please update soon

Finally a great chapter! Well done

I cheered when Khan roughed up Vartik. Really made my day! I think every member of the Enterprise would have a go at Vartik if they could get away with it! And what *is* that SOB up to? Nothing good, we know that much!

Glad to see this story updated.