Bravo! Nicely done!

Very good work you did here SpartAl412... Once again my kudos to you!... You really must make more of these... Finding a great Warhammer 40k fanfic in a xeno(like Eldar) point of view, where that of humans( i.e. Imperium of Man) predominates is a one-in-million find... Once again... Please make more such as this... maybe one with many chapters of great length?... Pretty please with cherry on top?

Love the story the main character is developing at a steady pace witch is important. The battles are well written and easy to follow. I would say that yout first chapter was the most enjoyable one out of the three done so far because of the more Ranger felll to the story though the other two chapters were quite good.

Awesome story and I understood everything because I've read the eldar books by Gav Thorpe and Andy Chambers. Eldar lore is so mysterious and you do an excellent job of portraying it in this story.

This is a very good story. Very well-written. You will have my respect from now on. However, there are few mistakes regarding Orks. First, "greenskins" is one word, not "green skins". And there are Eldar here, let me see some derisive comments on the Orks.
Anyway, love this one.