This is a really old story, but great plot and really great writing! I'll have to check out your other F&F fic!

lmfao hobbs couldnt stop laughing for a good 5 mins

This was pretty good; hope they meet again. Or like Doms all like I can't stop thinking about my princess and is unable to get it up for others anymore. Next time he catches her in trouble, helps her and try's to trap her so he never has to let go!

Okay I know that it says the stories complete, but I'm going to assume it's not because can't drop out of nowhere. I just want to know if you actually planning on writing more. I'm excited to see more of this story.

Hope you update soon.

Love it keep going.

i loved it. wish it was longer. i'm a sucker for long stories and chapters especially if its dom/oc . anyway i really hope u do a sequel to this. awesome job.

liked it interesting to read

loooooove it!

update choice.

Ah! Sequel pls!

Hm... Interesting. I'm sensing all sorts of complications. I like complications. They make things fun. When they're not, you know, happening to me. Great job!

Just wanted to let you know I have read the chapter and thats it as I have no criticism for you. Keep it coming.

P.S Loved it!

ahhh so cool!
need more! lol

Yay, sexy fun times! Great chapter. Update soon! Any chance of this continuing on beyond the next chapter?