| Reviews for Ash Is Back! |
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Dark Aura chapter 3 . 7/5/2013 You are doing good. Why havent you updated? No offense but make your storys longer so people dont finish up quickly! |
Blake Massacre chapter 3 . 6/14/2013 Another a good chapter ;) |
Blake Massacre chapter 2 . 6/14/2013 Good chapter |
Blake Massacre chapter 1 . 6/14/2013 Cool also a nice move set |
DaLurkMaster chapter 3 . 6/4/2013 Where is the next Chapter? Oh yea, I read the story this is based on, and really liked it :D I hope this one will be as good. My favourite Fanfic is The Pokemon Master by Acey I hope that you have time to read it someday. Its over 500 pages long, but its not mine unfortunately |
SpecialGuy9000 chapter 1 . 5/30/2013 Ash Has A Lot Of Pokemon, Maybe Ash Might Learn The Power To Bring Dead People Back To Life Starting With His Mother Delia Ketchum. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 wow what an original story so unique and obviously NO ONE has ever done it before NO ONE (sarcasm) |
JLgods01 chapter 2 . 5/31/2013 update. |
TheBlackPrince3 chapter 2 . 5/30/2013 Well, short chapter. Looking forward for the next chapter and it would be great if you make the chapters a bit longer. |
TheBlackPrince3 chapter 1 . 5/30/2013 I don't want to be too harsh but there are many spelling and grammer mistakes and you're missing punctuation marks and spaces after a pokémon name and comma (,). Please double check the chapter before posting. And I didn't know some of the moves but you already said it and I think that they are a combination of two attacks, so no problem. Just check the chapter before posting. Oh and what do you mean 'all moves'? Does that mean that the legendary pokémon knows all the moves there are in the world and he has every legendary pokémon? |
dangfang42 chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 Like the story. Update soon |