what happened ?!
why leave these unfinished masterpieces?!

are you going to continue this story

Finish your stories.

I love your story!

Please update this

Hurry with updates to both please

Hi David:
I've been away for too long. Just getting back into things.
After reading Agri-corps, I am sorry to hear that you may discontinue this story. You have in this story a good look into the inner mind of people and their hopes, dreams, and worries. I consider this a very good, and different, perspective on your Order Redeems-which is wonderful story in itself. It is because it is more of a think-piece on the human mind that I like it so much. I think you have been adding light saber fights because people think you should have action and thrills. I like it for the perspective on other things-such as love and dreams.
I was also hoping that you would have more of the intimacies and more of the personal interactions in this story between Lux and Ahsoka and you did that in this chapter.
In any case, I will wait for new updates but I know how hard it can be sometimes with writing.
Good luck with everything.
johnt

It's good to see that Ahsoka is almost back to normal. I'm guessing the last two chapters for this tie-in will be during Tarkin's trial and Ahsoka's seventeenth Life Day.

YEAH! New chapter!

Good writing..

Please though... not Lux... anyone but him...
Rex, Barriss... yes...
Lux... NOoOOooOOooOOoooOOOooO! - actual quote from Episodes III and V.

This was really something. The conversation with Plo was seemed very descriptive and the duel looked interesting. David, make sure you and all the other reviewers and followers pray for me; I have a 9:00AM appointment on the 8th for having my wisdom teeth extracted.

Great chapter. This story really adds to the Order Redeems, I like it a lot. Seeing the events from Ticarti's point of view is very interesting. The next chapter sounds pretty funny, I predict quite the bit of teasing.

I love this story! It is such a perfect tie in I feel like I'm watching Star Gate Atlantis when reading this and Star Gate SG-1 when reading The Order Redeems. Keep on keeping on my fellow Ahsoka fan!

D.D.5851: I second ahsokanerd on this chapter. It was very good with some action and some revelations and analysis of Ahsoka's thoughts. I have always liked this story as a deeper, analytical think-piece taking place behind the scenes of Order Redeems. Keep up the good work. johnt

That was very, very well written. The duel was also well done, with the perfect balance of humor, action, and surprise to keep me into the story. First time I read a chapter of this story that did not have me cringing at any moment at all, and I just wanted to continue reading more and more. The little touch of Master Plo Koon being present was a nice addition to the dialog. Ticarti's constant thoughts for Ahsoka's mental health is also nice, and it was kept at a proper amount that was pleasing to read. It was just a really good chapter.

Feedback on future chapters and your ideas you listed: Ahsoka is considered of one the best duelists in the Jedi Order, and she also beats her master (Anakin, obviously) on several occasions. In fact, she ends up beating him more times then she loses (see the last novel written for The Clone Wars). If Anakin can kill everyone in the Jedi Temple, while clouded by the dark side of the force (but I admit he did so with the help of clones), I think that Ahsoka would continue to beat anybody she duels with for a long, long time. So I'm not worried that Ticarti didn't win. The only reason why I would be worried is if she did win.

Haha, Ahsoka sleeping with Lux. Now that is a discussion I look forward to reading. Um, if I may be so bold, I hope you clarify to Ticarti that Ahsoka isn't just sleeping in bed with Lux, but also having, uh, you know...

Thanks for writing!

- AhsokaNerd