Amazing story! The OOCness is fine since it's a special paro and I can see that you are trying to parallel this fic with the movie. Sometimes I do think that Sasori behaves too emotionally (like when he screams in the school hallway) which is unlike him but on a second thought I think it's acceptable. Sometimes Sasori's cheerful, childish pretense is driving me crazy, but the more I hate it, the more I excited and fascinated I feel when he reveals his true personality. I particularly like the last few chapters. They are very engaging and a good climax of the story. And I also like the ending very much. Thank you for writing this fantastic story!

Wow how did you come up with writing a SasoDei story based on "Orphan"? It has never occurred to me, but the instant I saw your fic's summary it struck me as unprecedentedly brilliant. Glad to see it's finished so that I'd not be left desperate for the ending. Thank you.

This is very genius. Really. Once started, I just couldn’t focus on other things without thinking about this story, so...I stayed up and read through it nonstop (good girls shouldn’t do that( ᐛ 」)＿）. The idea of fitting SasoDei into Orphan caught my attention in the very beginning, considering what Sasori is like in the manga, and this fic did not disappoint me. It perfectly balances going with the movie’s plot-line/scenes and developing SasoDei’s relationship. I enjoyed genuinely enjoyed reading it. Thank you for creating this awesome story! And I feel your love for this pairing XD

Holy shit it’s so fucked up AND romantic

It is 2 AM in my time zone, and I haven’t finished the story yet but feel like that I have to review first. Just, wow, so intriguing. Usually when I read fan fics I’m more interested in the pairing/romance, but for this one the story has won my heart. Don’t get me wrong though I absolutely love the SasoDei interactions in this fic (especially when Sasori unleashes his dark side lol). Amazing work.

Holly shit this story is just damn just damn. This movie scared my shitless as a child and now when I rewatch it I will think of this story. You write just amazing the way you described the characters and the plot damn just damn way better then the movie way better.

This is a masterpiece.

I'm rather thankful I'm not the only psychotic writer around :'D

Oh my god this is my 6th time reading this story and I'm Russian and that translation was actually pretty on point. I just love this story so much you have no idea, it's amazing. Please keep writing!

Can I have this Sasori I mean seriously

This is an incredibable piece! I saw the movie on LMN and it freightened and astonished me! I didn't expect anyone to make a story from it! Please update soon and man I know how you feel school cuts a huge chunk of posting! And will Dei REALLY kill someone!?

OMG I totally loved the ending!

Wow and loved it! Epically psychotic and morbid too and I want to see them through the end...well, I hope them a happy ending:P

Omf, I misread the sentence 'the sequel should begin around the time of this month'
to 'the sequel should begin after his time of the month'
I'm sorry Sassy-Kun
No wonder his hair is such a vibrant red X3

Anyway That was amazing, I didn't want to read it 'cause it was the last chapter but I did want to read it 'cause it was the last chapter, if that makes sense.
I really want the sequel, I literally can't wait, I need mer OTP

This is suuuuch a great fanfiction, I love it, and it's my favourite SasoDei/DeiSaso Fanfiction, Like...Ever!
Have you got any SasoDei/DeiSaso fanfictions for me to read whilst waiting for the sequel?
Be it on , Ao3 or anything else.
Thank you, and I can't wait for the sequel!;3

I don't rely know what to say... this was too good. I will read the sequel. I LOVE this story!

Your writing makes me laugh so much! I just want to take the time to tell you how much I appreciate the laughs I get from some of your stories, especially Taller. Never stop writing! :)