Thst was beautiful

Damn! That was absolutely fantastic! 3

intersting...is that mean there will be another chapter?._...as always hottttt...and so sweet as the same time..wonderful...

Really Hot and Cute!

I've never played Marco Polo before but I would definitively love to try it out now. That is how good you are: you manage to ignite in us the desire to learn ;D Despite the obvious aspect that we all appreciare, the words are absolutely beautifully written miss. The way you describe the actions is so well done that I had the impression to be present. Wonderful story. The only bad thing about it is that it has an end ;D More soon please? You won't force me to beg, will you?

Aww! Will u marry me!? Lol but no in all seriousness that was sooo cute and sweet! I loved Spencer's little speech to Ashley.. U really have a way with words and are amazing at making your readers feel the emotions that the girls are feeling! At least this reader! The Marco polo game was super fun aaand hot :) I've been a fan since your first story and if I win the lotto I will definitely be paying u to write spashley stories full time lol. But until then I will be patiently waiting for u to have time to write the next one... Any hints on the scene your using next? :D

oh no...?