OMG I LOVE THIS! please please PLEASE wright more! soon? XD this is so amazing, i would love to read more. very well written, you captured their personalities perfectly. keep up the fantastic work.

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This is soo cute! I love how he and Ethos get together and try to think of things to get Cain!

Hope you keep on writing about the boys.

This was not what I was expecting, and it was a good surprise; the way you describe their feelings about each other really tickled me, I liked it :)

I loved this! Please write more, and don't worry about betaing unless you want to, I never beta either (I'm too impatient). There are some gorgeous lines in this;

"There's only one fucking bitch that I want to own," Cain whispers, and he fucks Abel until the navigator howls."

For a moment Abel doesn't answer, and then his shy expression takes on that inner strength that Cain doesn't know the origins of (and isn't surehe wants to know the origins of), but wants to own. Cain wants to own it almost as much as he wants to own Abel; almost as much as he needs to own Abel.

I could quote everything basically, please write more for us rabid fans! There's no such thing as too much fic :)

Oh, darling, it was beautiful! Don't be apprehensive about your writing. The style is gorgeous and the descriptions are spot on. It's really, really good! I loved this fic, it was really cute and in the end Abel gave him the best birthday present either. I'm still wondering what he and ethos were planning with the dogs and cats, though. Haha! Great fic, I hope you'll find it in yourself to write more Starfighter because your writing is simply beautiful.

Bawwwww, this was very sweet, love all of Abel's maybes, that was a nice note to carry through the whole fic. Love their dynamic here, Cain is so bad but there's so much affection.