Everyone's in-character.
Typo: "oncee" should be once.

This is wondrous.
Typo: "aded" should be added.

Here we go again...

Heh. And here we go again, for another round. I just wonder if Harry would be able to find Toby.
Wonderful story, thank you for the read!

Wow! This is so original and well done! I love how you picture the fae as a dangerous force you do not meddle with, very true to the myths and tales about them.

Fantastic cross over! Love the difficult choices they have to make :)

All this could be fixed by healing David's heart...

Very subjective review tonight:
I think you capture the voice of Harry Dresden very well. (His reaction to Jareth's outfits had me laughing out loud.) I also like how you found a logical place for the Goblin King in the magical universe of TDF. And if Jareth got his Sarah, he'd be *that* protective of her.
So, I love the story... but I'm not quite sure I like the spin you put on it in this last chapter as much as I would have another ending or ending it with chapter 6.)

You know, there's something to be learned about human nature in this story, for all that it revolves around magic. This was an incredibly effective crossover and I could see it very well, as though it was a movie.

I know that I'm very late to the party here, but this was one of the first stories I read when I got into Labyrinth fanfiction and I wanted to tell you how much I adore it. I've been a huge fan of the Dresden Files since Storm Front and you really nailed Dresden's voice. Well done!

An excellent story, but, as fitting as it is, endings where characters don't remember the story always leave me feeling unsatisfied because, from the perspective of the one I'm invested in, the story was just undone.

What a great story! And that ending was awesome!

Fabulous. I just wish there were more of it. Thank you for writing!

Stars and stones, this story is absolutely brilliant! My two favorite fandoms in a beautifully written mashup...not to mention hilarious. My new favorite...

Ouch what an ending ...