Reviews for The Romantic
Holy heck chapter 1 . 1/9/2018
This was amazing! I didn’t expect the way it ended at all! Kiku has really helped them out, I can see XD
YuukoHonda chapter 1 . 1/9/2017
Somewhere in this mansion, my younger brother Kiku cackled in his head and checked off another ship of his friends on his yaoi list. Sigh... Since he's met Alfred and Arthur, he'd claimed them as his 'unspoken Otp...' Ah well.
Guess having an otaku baby bro isn't too bad... when he ships the same ships!
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I loved this story! So adorable! Kiku you sly, silent, behind the scenes hawk! (He gets the cupid instincts from me~! Lol) I SHIP IT SO HARD. I SHIP IT LIKE JAPAN!
1919919 chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
oh my this is so adorable
Emeraldinhereyes chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
Awww I loved this! For a minute I thought that Alfred (like America) was the one in the box and he was gonna have a mental breakdown and kill arthur because he had a history programmed into his mind rather than knowing he was a robot (aka he didn't remember being shipped in or stepping out of the box and thought he was human). Lol you can always tell a true hetalia fangirl by if she expects the fic to go really dark really fast. Great job though and kiku you sly dog ( w) I see what he did there.
DeiDeiArtistic chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
So cute I'm going to cry QAQ
Black-Tie-Plum chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
That was so sweet. Kiku being a behind-the-scenes mat making mastermind gives me life and I have to admit I'd really like to see Alfred getting jealous of robot Alfred. This was a great story. Xxx
Hailey chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
That was fudging awesome
Chiisaioni chapter 1 . 1/26/2015
Chobits! Chobits everywhere! :D
I like that you made Kiku the cupid, not usual Francis-style.
And we all know that never ending battle in Arthur's mind - the logic and romantic soul. You've grasped that really well. Thank you for writing this! :)
shubhekshaacharya chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Yes. Yes. YES. I love this. I love this so much. I love fanfics with Kiku setting Arthur and Alfred together so, with my love for programming and armed with the knowing of Kiku setting the up in the end , since a friend recommended ths fix to me because of that, I read. And I wasn't disappointed. I LOVE this fic. With Romantic!Arthur with a mix of Logical!Arther and with live Alfred coming in at the end, it was is was awesome. ( I'm Prussia now, that's how great this is.) 10 out of 10. A. Great job.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
and in far away place, a certain Japanese man tried hard to not laugh in glee.

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*laughs in both amusement and amazement*

Okay... this fic... Definitely... BEYOND what I Expected !

The Hell-! This is Far from any Imagination I expected of the summary ! ! !

THIS. IS. INCREDIBLY. AWESOME ! ! !

oh for love sake... I want sequel... *sobbed on the corner*
hero-certified chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
This is so beautiful, I have no words for this. Like, shiz this continue to a full story but of course I'm satisfied with the ending. They're so cute! This also reminds me of the video crossover of Kara and USUK.
Very beautiful, great job!
Annzy Bananzy chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
I really enjoyed this fic XD I liked how Arthur kept pinballing the thought that he was a romantic and then justifying his own actions to himself over and over. I made me chuckle.

A few parts made me laugh /really/ hard, like when live-Alfred was like, "Hey! I'm Alfred, too!" I don't know why for that part, I just found it inexplicably funny XD I also LOVE Kiku's note at the end! That little matchmaker XD I'm surprised he would use so much of his technology and time just to get his friends together, though! What a nice guy :)

I also really enjoyed and appreciated the following lines:
"Flaws like that gave live-Alfred a natural character, unique little points that no one else would have just the same.
His persocom would never have anything like that. No little flaws Arthur could love, and feel proud to adore when no one else did. Everything had been manufactured and planned, even if it was by Arthur himself. And even though Arthur liked having control...romance wasn't about control."

That whole talk about flaws just made me feel really happy, because it's exactly right. Romance isn't about control, and flaws are what make you /human/. They're what make you different and unique and noticable, and, one day, someone will notice them and love them because they're part of /you/ and they love /you/. I just... that idea's really strengthened with this fic, I feel, so thank you very much for that.
champcuute chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
I can't tell you how in suspense I was this whole time!
First expecting something like Absolute Boyfriend as the story, then believing Kiku planed a test run and actually sent the persocom in disguise as Arthur's "neighbor" and finally squealing with the whole actual thing!
I really loved your theme! Often times romantics (including me) lose faith and hope, like Arthur does, but then this story just reminds the reader all over again why they're a romantic in the first place.
Since I've likely gone all over the place by now, what I'm really just trying to say is amazing story and development, you really surpassed cliches and such, and I loved every minute of reading it!
Thanks so much!
D-Channerz chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
I loved this! What an awesome twist. I had kind of an idea where it was going to go and then you completely blew that out of the water, haha. Very cute and sweet. Nice job!
S chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Unexpected and so cute! Loved the story, and I'm kind of pleased that the human, imperfect, possibly even sometimes a little annoying, Alfred won in the end. Go team humanity ;D
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