Please continue this! Also, as a side note, I think you're summary was misleading. I always thought this story was about the doctor trying to get to clara. As in "He the Doctor. And a " 11/Clara horror story" meant the doctor was trying to get to clara. Anyways, continue it please!

Well, I've been trying to keep myself awake so I can pull an all-nighter with my friends, and I have to say, this story worked better than anything I've tried so far. No sleep for me tonight! (Or, like, for the next week...) Utterly chilling and extremely creepy story. Good job. :3

This gets better and better the more I read! :D

...this is actually really scary...i should not have read this at night...before i have to go to sleep...in the dark...in a room with a mirror...
yeah...seriously though, consider that a compliment, this is really good writing, from what i can see this is one of my favourite stories that you've written
it's mysterious and suspenseful and did i mention scary?
anyways, hoping for a quick update because i do want to know how this all ends...

Loving this story so far! Adore the parts like at the start of this chapter and they really do build the tension a lot :D

Great story! Almost like an episode of Doctor Who :) I love the way your story changes and swerves in new directions. Also great job with the creepy factor, you've definitely got that down. Keep up the awesome writing! :)

Wow! I love this story! It's incredibly well written and the plot is great. I love how you can make the whole scene dark and scary while still having little bits of humor. _

Oooh! Extremely intriguing! On par with an actual episode, in my opinion.

I can not wait to see what the pay-off is for this story! Even though Clara is not my favourite companion, you have written her well in this and the Eleventh as well.

Keep on writing! :)

Another excellent two chapters! You build the suspense quite well and the mystery of the Book extremely well! Only complaint is a few spelling mistakes here and there but hardly the end of the world.

A fantastic story so far! I look forward to your next entry!

I despise your very being. Why would you do this to me?

The whole flow of your story has a very Ernest Hemingway feel to it, in the sense that it's very snappy. But then there's the whole Lovecraft-ish, almost Edgar Allan Poe-esque, undertone to it that makes me want to hide under the bed and cry for my mother. It's fast, it's exciting, and the suspense is very essentially true to Moffat's own feel of the show.

Good job, you. :) This changes nothing. I still hate you. Why would you even-

xx, Jonnah.

Wow! This is really scary and amazing! I love it. finally there is a story with Clara and the 11th that is good in itself. Not just a drabble or an echo of the series and characters. Yay! perhaps Whouffle writes are finally getting better and you are definitely the best!

By all the bloody stars and supernovas, this is absolutely majestic.

The writing is fluidity is natural and captivating. The premise is glorious and the dark undertones reveals the utterly brilliant dementia of this world. It's fantastic and you've got me shaking the screen of my laptop as I read every single word. I appreciate the little hints to Classic Who in there, even though I haven't had the privilege of seeing anything from Classic Who (though I've read up quite a bit on it) but man, oh man. It has that same taste - that same unnerving hook that gets you from the word go.

You are phenomenal in every aspect. You, my good fellow, have got yourself a fan.

xx, Jonnah.

You have me utterly hooked! I love it! Can't wait to see the next chapter!

nkkgg4eswreiyokamakldfmjlark this is so AMAZING!

Interesting 1st chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens