That was amazing and I love that Emma's trying to get through her worry about Killian dying from the poison by trying to play it off that it's nothing and that was great!

Some top-notch hurt/comfort here! I love how Emma was trying so hard to hide her fear and keep him talking, and I love how she went absolutely feral on the mermaid trying to drag him away! Their banter was also spot-on, and I adored the feelings at the end with the whole first mate thing!

This is wonderful, it captures Emma and Killian very well, at a early stage of their friendship / alliance. Neverland is fascinating, and you cover it superbly with mermaids, flowers, bleeding shadows, potion pots, Lost Ones. I love this, "...the man he'd give his life to kill sleeping inside his home." Think about that! Gold on the Jolly Roger! How did Hook allow it? Excellent, thanks for writing.

Hands up, this is by far the best Hook whump fic I've read. I just absolutely love the interaction between Emma and Killian and the amount and quality of sarcasm you've managed to put into Emma's thoughts is incredible. I love it. Absolutely love it.

Wow this was beautiful

"Does that mean you are my first mate?" Chills. Seriously, I'm not kidding.

I LOVE THIS! You did a great job, and I for one think near-death situations are the best kind. :3

Dammit, I really enjoyed this. And it's not a fic! I love how you made Emma lose her cool and just burn with rage- I honestly wanted to read all the tics like that. Goody-two shoes doesn't always work, you need a little splash of savageness. I really love how you characterized them, they are so close, so-so real. I love it! I hope to see more from you!

I really enjoyed reading this, I don't know why I haven't found it sooner! Great job on the writing, I loved their conversations throughout the chapters :) keep up the amazing work :D

This is more than a year old now but I'll say it anyway, this is by far the best Emma of every fanfic I've ever read.
I love the sarcasm a lot. xD

This story is pretty damn awesome! Loved reading it! :)

I hesitated to click this story for a moment then thought, "To hell with this" and went ahead. I am really really glad I did. The humor and peril were a perfect mix and the characterization was brilliant. I can totally see this taking place in the context of the show without being in any way out of place. Excellent job!

Glad I clicked :)
-Nina

Just realized I wasn't signed in when I left that review. Whoops. As I said, brilliant job!

-Nina

This was absolutely wonderful.

Flawless and well written and WITTY so very witty. I loved it. Well done! :)

I think I just fell in love with you and your story.