This is so cute and so sweet. I loved the way this was written, how it shows Kaname's weakness against Yuuki whilst still maintaining that alpha, prideful side of him. I don't think I've ever seen anyone capture that sentimental, playful personality of his so well. Even his laughter was though creepy, adorable since it was meant for Yuuki. Can't wait for more! Update soon! :)

This was sweet! I liked it a lot. Cute idea for a short fanfic. 3

Oh gosh, this story was so cute! I can totally picture Kaname being moody about not seeing Yuki at all and brooding over the fact that Zero gets to spend so much time with her. Great one shot! :)

This was indeed sweetfully blissful. Something that I could see it happen in the anime/manga. You had nailed the characters' personality for the most part. And yes, I remember reading in the fanbook that Kaname gets 'moody' when he doesn't see his princess and mops around (the image of Kaname's bangs being clipped up is in my head now). It's like he's suffering from Yuuki-withdrawal or withdrawal of Yuuki. Poor guy.

I liked the possessive thoughts Kaname had in the beginning of the chapter. The 'immature' side of him, refusing to tend to his political matters, is something we don't see everyday. He always hold the aura that he's mature and responsible. So to see him, struggling to deal with his political manners because the thoughts of his princess keeps invading his head-is purely adorable.

Also Headmaster Cross secretly taking photos and assembling a scrapbook of Yuuki-totally believable. Then of course, Kaname hiding this in his closet (somewhere where you would least expect a high and mighty pureblood would hide his valuable things, say the typical locked drawer/box) is cute. It shows how he wanted to bury his past of Yuuki away... to distance himself away from her for her own safety.

And of course Yuuki would just love anything from Kaname-sama. Headmaster Cross furiously taking photos (for possibly blackmailing) in the background was priceless, it made me smile.

Kaname lost his cool a bit when Takuma mentioned about Yuuki. I wonder if he realized that, but he probably didn't care. Takuma seemed very taunting, mischievous-another thing that I could imagine him doing, his sunshiny outward appearance could be misleading.

Yep, Kaname totally lost it when his princess arrived. A love-struck teenager indeed. Very self-conscious, again something that you wouldn't see every day. It was interesting to read that. And my gosh... of all questions, Yuuki had to ask that. If I may ask, just out of pure curiosity, why Mexico? *nudges you* Do you know any good chocolate from Mexico? Haha. Way too adorable and Yuuki-like with all the flustering. Seriously, Kaname likes to see her being embarrassed... a tad sadistic if you ask me. I'm assuming it must be the most adorable thing ever to him.

Anyways, this was extremely fluffy, it seemed to be one of the missing scenes of the VK anime/manga past. A good reminiscence. Thank you for sharing it with us. Now onto constructive criticism, the only things that I could suggest to make this story even better are the following: this happens to me frequently and I'm so frustrated at my own writing, but be careful with your verb tenses. I see you sometimes switch from past to present. Also, adding a few details to items such as the pattern or color of the hideous sweater that-is-forbidden-to-be-replicated would provide the reader a more vivid image (this is entirely optional, the way you went with is good too, letting the readers' imagination go wild).

And that concludes my review, I look forward again to your next piece :)!

Loved it! Sweet and fluffy

Ooh this is so cute and soo Kaname! I love it

Reading and imagining about kaname laughing was impossible but now it became true, thank you

Kaname laughing reminds of the bit in the series where he was laughing after Cross showed him that Yuuki dressed herself for the first time ever

That was soooo CUTE!
I love how you paid attention to those little informations included in the Fan-book. -