Interesting story, are you going to write a sequel? Please

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Wow. That was anti-climatic. A very ironic ending to a very climatic fight. So Sly has now realized the error of his ways...maybe now he'll have a change of heart-or turn himself in and do time for the crimes he committed. I like how Carmelita found out the truth, and the effects his actions had on Bentley and Murray. You did a really good job with this not to mention there's a moral: "Sometimes you don't realize what you've done until you've seen the damage." Woo-hoo! I don't know if this is the ending or if you have another chapter, but whatever you have planned, I'll be awaiting it patiently!

A climactic fight, and an end that truly makes one think. In a previous review I said that I came expecting a story of violence, and was also met by reasoning and the rationals behind it. I stand by this, and to all who see this review and gave not read this, I ask that you do. And to you, the writer, if this is not yet at the final notes, I await the end, and the sequal if there ever is one. Fanus Obscurus, signing off once more.

You did an excellent job. Try to continue this story or make another Sly Cooper story, please.

That's deep. Update Soon

Short but interesting. I can't wait until the reveal, and for the sickle to strike its last mark.

And now the final battle approaches...woo-hoo! I'm enjoying this more and more! I wonder if Carmelita will find out about Sly being the Grey Sickle? I guess I'll find out if she makes it to Krak-Karov volcano in Russia!

Is Sly going to die in the end?

great fic

Did I mention how awesome this keeps getting? I'm just loving the evil, bloodthirsty, revenge-driven Sly here! He's seems way more unique than the normal, cunning, devious gentleman thief Sly we all know and love, especially in that scene when he went loco and nearly killed the Panda King in a blind rage! So now that Murray knows the truth, I wonder if Carmelita will find out? I guess I'll have to wait and see!

So will she find out in the next chapter? I like how you detail Sly's becoming of evil due to his thirst for false justice through death.
I also like to assume that Sly changed into the normal blue clothes we see in the games.

You have NO idea how much I want to read chapter 5!

I can't believe how touching this story is. I expected a remorseless tale of violence, and I have found a tale of sorrows. I anxiously await the next chapter of this work of art. Write on maestro and let the great works continue.

Yay! Murray's in! Now the gang is complete, but I do feel sorry for him in this though. That was the saddest origin-based tale I ever read. You almost made me shed a few tears. I love how darker and more angsty this is getting!