Very interesting story it was very emotional but not too sappy

Man that was actually pretty good, except for that ending though. It just seems like such a blunt sharp ending, like it was meant to go on but just sopped. Still really enjoyed it.

OMG THIS IS GORGEOUS! My heart was aching for Toad and i wanted to punch the shit out of Nightcrawler. You captured them perfectly. please please pleeeeeease write a sequal, or POV-qual, or more Todd/Kurt because you write them beautifully.

This story is everything I'd like to see in a oneshot. Little to no misspelled words, great plot, excellent length to support it. You have the makings of a great writer, so keep it up, and I'd like to see more of what you do.

Grace