First off. FUCK Jona. What a dick. I had high hopes for you. You seemed so nice and regular in that bar and here we are with you being a dick. And if you go back to my review of that chapter I predicted Reno would show up mid date and well...he did show up but not in the way I expected. I'm glad he did show up though but also WTF RUDE? IS? MISSING? you can't do that to me dude. Vincent has been missing forever and now fuckin RUDE? just kill me now. They better find both of them and fast. And Reno wtf do you mean you didnt tell Tseng about this? Come on bro, you need all the help you can get. But whatever. Rude better be alive when they find him. All in one piece, no injuries, infact lets have him show up at Edens doorstep tomorrow saying yo whats up i found vincent lets fuckin party and boom conflict over. Thank you for coming to my ted talk. The end. Maybe sacrifice Jona in exchange for their safety. But I bet hes detrimental to the plot, like hes some junon underground boss or something. I dunno, just throwing out potentials. Great chapter, cant wait for the next one, lets get Rude!

You're an angel. Thanks for update.
Can't wait for next chapter :)

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Goddamn fucking RUFUS WHAT THE HELL?! bruh. So many things wrong with that man. What the frick. Imagine being awful in everyway possible. Damn. I'm glad cloud agreed to keep shelke away from him and wait instead, but obviously he agreed because he knows what a dirty nasty bastard rufus motherfuckin shinra ass bitch can be. I knew there was something up with that necklace, but honestly i didnt think about a "throw myself at you in lust" magic thingy being what was wrong with it. Makes sense, but wasnt what i expected. Honestly i wasn't sure what to expect though so...anyways good to hear Charly is doing good and is still crazy haha. And its ok to be a little moody after what happened at the gala Eden, and now with the necklace. Hopefully this date goes better than anything else has recently but I have a feeling the angst is only just starting. Maybe I'm pessimistic. Who knows? Was definitely missing this fic during the slightly long wait, but you've been updating more often than alot of my other fics I read so it doesn't bother me. Great chapter today, can't wait for the next!

I swear you wake up some days and think "What can I write that will make Lindsay screech angrily the most?" DAMMIT RENO AND EDEN

Urgh. Love the story so far but Eden is becoming so annoying as the main character. She acts like a spoilt teen most of the time now which is severely off putting. I can imagine any guy would avoid her the way she acts. She is the definition of a Simp to Reno. Try imagining the roles reversed but the characters aren’t hot...it just becomes weird.

I fuckin KNEW Rufus was gonna be a little bitch this chapter. What a dick bag bro. My girl Eden is just tryin to have a good time and ignore Reno a little bit and then he goes and does this kinda shit. Good on Eden for leaving though. And we love Reno coming to the rescue, but I'm sad how easily he said that he's always used for this kind of deal. How often is Rufus making him take girls on dates and 'sealing the deal' for him? Regardless of how far it goes. And this is why I've been keeping an eye on Rufus the last few chapters. Good chapter! Excited for the next!

god damn these two. god damn rufus who always messes things up. Rufus is so good at planting seeds to get Reno and eden against each other it’s child’s play to him since he knows these two hotheads will do the hard work for him. Eden was having a great week, and then a marvelous night until Rufus bring Rufus was back with his bullshit.

I just wanna knock Rufus in his stupid little face.

I always enjoy your story. Keep up the good work!

Hmmmmm...just what are you thinking Rufus? -_- whatever it is I already don't like it. Although what a comeback to the world right? Everyone thinks you're dead for 3 years and then poof not only are you back but you're throwing a charity ball? Damn haha. If you take it at face value I can see how some people would be excited, like the news announcer lady, but as we know...well nothing is face value with Shinra. Like that necklace. Creepy just showing up outta nowhere and being all alluring and such. I can relate to feeling out of place in a dress, but sometimes you gotta be fancy like that. And Tsung! I'm gonna take that as a Reno appearance coming soon excited for the next one! Good chapter!

Oh shit.. into the lion's den we go!

Oops I'm a little late to the new update haha, I usually get it on the day of, but its ok. First off, ollie sweetie don't feel bad about Eva, she needs to loosen up a little and chill. If she didn't like the dangerous stuff Ollie does she shouldn't have gotten with him. Or at least find a compromise that isn't slowly stripping him of himself. Secondly, hell yeah dude! Club is going up on a goddamn Tuesday...or whatever day it is. I wish there was a description of what they wore but I can appreciate a little imagination and creativity on my part. And fuck yeah get the tequila we arent pussyfooting around on my watch. Idk if I just don't pay attention but I love the idea of Mako making you metabolize alcohol faster. It makes sense and if it isnt canon it should be. I'm glad they let loose once more before what my gut is telling me to be some bad news comes around. I love imagining Ollie hanging off of Eden in the street drunk off his ass haha! Also totally thought they would run into Reno either at the club or in the street but I'm not mad about it haha! I like the bartender seeing Eden's eyes and just ranting about his problems. I feel like thats probably a pretty common thing to happen. Hopefully Reno gets to the bottom of the issue no problem but I have a feeling thats just not gonna happen. Low key expected the bar they were in to just explode upon impact of having both Ollie and Eden there while drunk but I'm glad it didn't...yet. Also maybe I'm just suspicious and team Reno but this new mans over here is kinda sus. The crazy green eyes and the white hair...ringing any bells for anyone else or? Cuz I'm getting sephy vibes, but other than appearance he seems pretty ok, not too pushy or anything which we love. Also before I end this I just wanna go on record and say that if they go on a date and Reno runs into her mid date, I'm calling it. There, I said it. Idk what'll happen from there but just you watch, it'll happen, because Reno is Reno, and Eden is Eden. Thanks for the great chapter, I clearly had lots to say about it haha! Keep it up!

okaaaay eden I see you, you better get it girl. Honestly good for her cause sometimes you need a night where you can let loose, get fucked up, and take someone home. This night is long over due for eden. I felt her uncomfortableness in that club. She may appear loud and extroverted but that’s when she’s working on missions and has to be giving orders and leading people. Normal mundane tasks like going to the club is uncharted territory for our soldier gal. This is a mission in itself for eden.. to relax and just be. She’s not used to not fighting or investigating. I’m glad she has Ollie who can see how wound up tight she was becoming and knew she needed this more than him. On another note, with all the bullshit the men in her life have given her, I don’t blame her for interrogating Jona lol.

Aw I don't want their fun vacation time to end :( but of course everything must eventually. Of course right before Ollie wins the chocobo race his bird takes a dump on the track! Haha that was a nice addition and totally screams Ollie. We love Reno supporting Eden arm westling, and he totally deserves that 100gil. I love that she used their underestimating to her advantage haha! Always make them boys pay for pulling that crap! You gave me such anxiety saying the night was gonna go wrong but then when it was just karaoke night at a bar? Well, I understood haha. Good chapter! Also loving the frequent updates *debbie ryan* 3