Bat scouts? I LOVE the idea of them having bats as scouts! ️

Just got pulled over to read this by Chapter 3 being posted on its own on AO3. Absolutely beautiful, I love how you clearly Peter and Morgan as caring so much for each other even if they can't really relate to each other AND them then slowly relating to each other a bit more.

I AM DYING OMG THAT WAS HILARIOUS.

This is clever and adorable, and the best writing I have read in my six years on fanfiction

Edmund's proud daddy parentheses in the first paragraph are so adorable :)

I'm finding myself liking the otters in spite of myself. They're language gets tiresome very quickly, but interactions including them tend to turn out very amusing. And their titles seem most appropriate.

Three miscarriages? Poor Morgan...

Peter's collection of toys is downright adorable. I love the soft side of him that you are so adept at portraying.

I had to guffaw at some of the more oddly specific definitions. Such as "Supply Wagons Struck by Lightning." This... happens often? And needs a separate word from "Supply Wagons damaged?" I suppose it makes more sense then the chicken one, and recommending a good cook, though.

"Peacock's an ass." That he is. That he is. And Leszi makes me happy in this chapter :)

I figured out what "Morath" meant partway through and was grinning with anticipation for the rest of the chapter. So sweet... though that makes their inevitable return to Narnia that much sadder. I guffawed again at "Try pulling something that size out of your navel."

I'm curious, how much of this code do you actually have nailed down?

LOL... This was just too funny... especially the last two sentences xdd

I love how blunt Morgan is *giggles* I really liked how you wrote about Peter's and Morgan relationship and their mutual feelings of failure about the heirs. (still crying because of Alone!PregnantMorgan).

I wish this was the real story... they should have lived in Narnia forever T_T And Edmund should have been there with Morgan, and Peter should have been the best uncle ever :(
Also, I'm properly mad at Lucy's pregnancy! She would have been pregnant in a few months, had they not left :( :(

Yeah, the otters can only be appreciated by a special sort of people.

Oh my. Those otters are something else. Useful at times but in need of a good scepter swing every now and then. Entertaining story!

Aww, their bonding is sweet. And it very much explains why he was so excited for the little Prince of the last chapter. Precious!

Oh, Peter. He'll get it in time. But in the meantime, he has to go through some pretty funny mistakes! Asking for Hens from Cair Paravel is priceless! :D

HA! Literally laughing out loud for most of this chapter! Edmund & Susan's baby-escape planes-the best. And Sir Piss Off and Dame Arsehat are now, without doubt, my favourite knighted creatures...

Morgan really came into herself, as she grew in Narnia. I wish this AU was canon! :(

Wonderfully written, thank you! :)