I really hope you can update this!

This story is amazing... But sadly discontinued it appears. Poor Pitch discovering his daughter was dead. I can't say the revelation surprised me, I was expecting that to be the case. Hopefully Jack would have been saved by Pitch and Sandy.

We wouldn't mind if you can return from the dead again xD
sry can't help myself, I love that statement of yours xD
Can you still update this?
Or atleast post the ending outline?

I knew it. I just knew pitches daughter was dead. Poor guy. But at least now he can focus on only having to save/protect one person. I really like this one so far. I didn't think that i would like it this much, but i do. I really hope you come back to it someday. I'm going to save it in my favs in hope that it will update again someday. Even just a post saying what would have happened would be amazing. Great story so far :}

So I know that you've most likely abandoned this story but would you please update? I mean you said you would update within the week on AO3 but its been two years, does this mean you have part of a chapter hidden away on your computer somewhere? If so please post that partial chapter even if you aren't writing anything new. That being said I really hope you decide to take notice of all the reviews you've been getting and write some more. UPDATE!

Like two years have pass but I just discovered this story and I am falling in love with this soooooo...are you alive? If you are, are you planning to continue this?

If you are not well...i can only say that this story was amazing and i was loving every minute reading it. Thank you for your hard work

Make more plzzzzzzzzzz!

Gahhhh! So good! Please update I love it! I want to know what happens, don't stop!

I like this story so far. Keep up the good work.

I love this story and I need to know what the end will be, please can you finish the story!

Love the story! I do have a question. Us this going to be Mpreg? I am only asking this because it seems that mostly everyone is okay with same sex marriage. So I would think that some guys could get pregnant. I also think it would be a good plot twister, and it could help pitch. Well just a question I was thinking. Anyway wonderful story, well thought out, and beautifully written. Please update soon.

So are you going to continue with this? I really think you should its a great story!

Pitch to the rescued!
Ugh that mad man, someone needs to lock him yup in a fun house lol.

I like this chap. It was good and as always
I look forward to the next chapter

Oh my god, please tell me what's going to happen next. This is just...amazing!

Please update soon bye