good job!

I hope I'm looking up at the sky while sitting in that hill. I'm going to find Acnologia and avenge Igneel.

If i was in Natsu's position, i will just castrate Gray. So simple.

You must write Natsu make circumcision to Gray from the core. That's my conclusion after what Gray done to Lucy and especially to Natsu. If you play with feelings, you need to be knocked out into pulp.

Also, Lucy was supposed to be the smart type without racing her actions and no the dumb one. Even Natsu was smarter than her. I think that Lucy accepted Gray no because she loved him but because he make her feel affordable. If that's the case, even Loke is much better option than cold Gray (he is literally and figuratively) and with better quotes.

As for the "I love you", you can make Lucy tell Natsu what they did (the deed) sure something means because (how you presenting it) this is not you did with someone without any feeling and the person who say "I love you" you didn't do it because it feels wrong. Just don't make sense. Don't you think?

You forgot to mention Jellal again and what he did with Erza. Also Levy, Cana and Erza they didn't said the truth to Lucy even indirect. You wrote for Levy who said to follow her heart and didn't leave any suspicion behind to make sense. As for Cana, was OOOOC (as all the characters) because didn't mess with Lucy using Natsu's feelings and Erza was suppose be the judgement type and didn't hit Gray for what he did with Lucy. Even she hit without thinking now she is mute.

P.S. Sorry for my english and keep going the hard work. Making stories will be great help to write the perfect story soon enough.

Well FUCK! Why did you have to have sex with her when she was drunk?! XD

Oh no.. Please don't tell me that ice prick did something to her!

gray is such a fucking asshole in this and he is actually one of my favorite characters too

This was a great story

Awesome

That was so beautiful! I believe that this is my new favorite. You should keep writing! I like your writing style!

Nice

This was sooo goood!

You hear that? *whispers* “His Lucy…” *FANGIRL ATTACK!*

This was super good! I think if you had ended with the 'I love you' thing then it would have been to cliche. It was really good though!

Fight fight fight fight fight I just love fights!