love it. ever considered making a sequel?

Cause of ur story I hadthis urge to read Gakuen Alice again . Though all I read was the ending I startedcrying again but thankyou for creating such a cute story . I was happy toHotoru in the story again!

That was just... Perfect!

*laughs* The epilogue was HILARIOUS! xD Btw, it was totally like Hotaru to say and do that...

This was just so sweet! I loved it!

U SHOULD REALY UPDATE

I just can't imagine Mikan asking Natsume to spend the night with her. But I really love your story.

Tear, my eyes are teary, OMG I like this one.

lololol c:

One of the best written M-rated stories in this site for this generation of writers, :)

Looking forward to reading more of your stories and it's nice to know that you have explored the idea of writing rather than merely reading the stories we have in this site. :)

Finally a fic no a beautiful and cononish fic about chap 178. Waited long enough for it.
I loved how you incorporated tiny details and weaved them. Like how big Natsume's hand is, and the fact that the 16 year old Natsume looks like he's in his 20s... All lilttle details from the chapter are well civered. Everyone on forums all over the internet are discussing these little points.

Also Mikan blamimng herself for the loneliness Natsume has been through, is typical of her. I also liked the part about another 2 year separation. Logical.

Its nice that grandpa supports those two.

And after I read chapter 178 even I had the idea that the hotmonal teenager Natsume sure must be having various 'desires' now that he meet after 4 years of desparation ad longingness. But never had I imagined that Mikan would initiate the move !

All in all you kept all in character. Good job.

A favor : write a sequel. About what happens 2 years later. ;-) :-P

P S The epilogue was totally LOL. Koko ddnt even have to use his alice to find out what Natsume has been upto.

PPS Natsume being worried that Mikan might have done it with someone was natural. I mean he must have felt insecure all thise 4 years of separation and plus she didnt even remember him so hes worried that she might have had 'others' But dont worry Natsume Mikan rejects every confession she gets. you should have included that in the stort . You know maybe a spinoff about their conversations. you mentioned that they talked and talked. You can show that dey had a petty argument where Natsume asks Mikan of her other '. Just a random thought.

PM me if you want :-) :-D

YES! Finally! A FanFic that guesses at what would after 178! Thank you so much!