Just pointing out a minor error in the chapter :) Instead of typing out "Mount Edonis", you accidentally put in Mount Olympus. I'm not really sure if this will make much of an impact (I'm guessing not really since it's just a name), but I thought I'd point it out.

Other than that though, the entire story was quite good. Granted, I do wish you had a stayed longer on the scene in the underworld because I absolutely adore angst and what better place to angst than in the realm of the dead and torn apart? Overall though, the story was truly well written. Although, this last chapter does seem a bit.. cut off. Like, I get the feeling that something's missing. Then again, it could just be the reader in me, hoping for an update even though the story is /clearly/ finished. xD