Mmm. Another great read! I really enjoyed how you wrote them with all the building (and then releasing of) tension. :)

Lovely plot and action! Needs a little beta-ing at places for minor grammar and vocab errors. Feel free to have my assistance in that matter. Keep up the good work!

Hot hot love this pair

Hot. This was hot and I loved it. And they are very true to what we see of them in canon, which makes it so much better.
''But for Akabane, his bloodlust equaled life'' This sums up Akabane so beautifully.
Hope you write more for this fandom and Thank you :D

Mmmm, nice and hot! :) The only thing I would take issue with is the constant switch between tenses past and present which makes it a little confusing at first, but that's a minor detail in the grand scheme. I love how sneaky Akabane is and requesting particular "payment" from Ban is exactly the sort of thing he'd be game for. XD And this bit: "Ban looked at Akabane, like really looked this time, and saw the glint of desperation in those eyes, the pleading that he would never express verbally, but was there none the less. It hit Ban that he understood, for he could be driven by his own bloodlust if he let it happen that way. But he chose not to live like that. But for Akabane, his bloodlust equaled life; it was why he does what he does, why he gets so mad if a job turns out to be ordinary. He cannot live if that need is not satisfied." I loved that, it really does sum the both of them up well. And of course, the yummy yummy yaoi. :) Great job!

awesome smex!