Reviews for Becoming Independant
Currahee506 chapter 2 . 5/17
update pls
lovelylexi.3483 chapter 2 . 12/23/2019
Is it a habit for authors on her to not finish stories and to forget about them? If that is the case then why not write all the chapters ahead of time then post them?
Imma 2year old chapter 2 . 10/22/2019
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James Marx chapter 2 . 6/24/2019
I really like the way the story is going so far. If you could get a update up soon that would be great. If you need help with ideas or anything like that just let me know ive read over 120 or more different stories on here and ive read the original series as well. Im also a beta for like 4 different stories from just one author.
hunzbookwyrm chapter 2 . 6/3/2019
Great start, hope to see more soon.
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 2 . 4/20/2019
Please can we have some more
Latarra chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
That was fun.
fraidykat chapter 2 . 4/30/2018
Thanks for what you wrote and just maybe you might have something somewhere to add to this but since it been 5 years almost I doubt it but I understand having children and life controlling you.
Juanita
aradia1967 chapter 2 . 4/17/2018
please if you are still writing fanfiction please update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2018
How...original ( complimented with snape famous sneer and drawl voice )
tyrannicpuppy chapter 2 . 12/8/2017
Well you are most certainly a talented writer. In only two chapters you have me craving more from this story.

I immediately loved the interactions between Harry and Hermione (being an avid Harmony fan) despite the slight anachronisms that arise from the inheritance style changes to canon.

I'm very curious as to where the money had been going and for what purposes, both with the Dursleys and Hogwarts. Why is Dumbledore denying students the ability to check for inheritance as well?

The cliches are definitely there, but as with generalizations they tend to exist for a reason and don't have to mean a story cannot be very good, as yours is so far.

Looking at the dates and having read your notes I see that story has likely been abandoned, and that is a real shame as you have clearly caught a great many peoples attention with this brief introduction to it. I hope someday you can return to writing and we can see a lot more of your designs unfold.

I must agree with Harry, shopping is such a burden. Us guys never enjoy being dragged through a mall even if it is for our own benefit. But at least doing it with his close friend would have allowed to be slightly enjoyable. Though the potential for embarrassment on both their behalf would be very high while trying on clothing.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
Durzkaban! I LOVE IT!

I'm not usually a huge fan of inheritance fics but this one already solidly has my full attention.

I can't stay long, have to get to chapter 2 post haste.
BloodKills-Matt chapter 2 . 9/25/2017
Love the story its amazing and would love to read some more if you have the time to write the next chapter
AWESOME chapter 2 . 8/16/2017
I Can't wait for more!
bet7368 chapter 2 . 6/7/2017
Just found your story. I read your comments about slow updates. Question when do we expect another chapter. Not being mean I understand real life but you got a good story here. Thank you for writing it. Have a good day.
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