Reviews for Balance of Power
nhrc chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
"Yeah, no shit, Sherlock." (Between a smile to laugh) You're funny.
(finish the story)
What ?
That's how you finish?
No! No! No! No! No! No! I forbid you to leave the situation as it is!
You cruel little thing!
PROFESSIONAL HELP you say?

If you do not write a sequel with a happy ending for Jim and Spock I will send you to a psychiatric hospital for treatment ... with electric shocks !
(evil laugh)
bladedfanfighter chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
* I love that reference. Sooooo much. Enjoyed the rest of it, too.
blondebutnotblonde chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
You should write a sequel! This was really good :D
Sheepdog20 chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Well..not sure what the hell that was, but I liked it and I know I should be ashamed. I hope Spock didn't see that much.
purplehazyfog chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
OMG PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER WHERE SPOCK IS MAD AT HIM AND JIM IS TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHY AND THEY'RE BOTH TRYING TO FIGURE OUT THEIR FEELINGS AND THEN HAVE SEX WHERE SPOCK IS IN CHARGE AND CLAIMS JIM, TELLING HIM "YOU'RE MINE"
Nintendo Queen chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Well...I think my nose just exploded.

I now have a new favorite pairing...
Hades Daughter chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
I hope you aren't abandoning this story! Kirk/Khan has become my new favorite ship and this story is one of the best out there so far! Please write a new chapter soon!
sexy-sassy-proud chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
When I saw that I died laughing then regenerated and continued reading xD
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Thank you so much for the sherlock
CrystalVixen93 chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
Love ur story and hope update again soon plz.
Liz chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
"Yeah, no shit Sherlock." Hahaha, I see what you did there! ;)
zeynel chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
I LOVE THIS! I just love this. And the licking at the end! Oh, I bet Khan know about vulcan's hand sensitivity and how *debauched* it must have looked for Spock... _
leanne chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
this is a great start and i cant wait for more. but-
ummmmmm maybe you could make this an OT3 ... just saying... :)
please?
KnoKnayme chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Oh please continue on with this! I love this pair!
Lady of the Shards chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Nah. You don't need any help. You're good.
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