oh no i have a new ship

I never left a proper review but this story is ahhhhhmazing. I'm eagerly awaiting an update to the sequel BUT I have been dipping into my favorite chapters of this one while I wait!

I'm reading this for the second time around as you revise your chapters and I must say that this story is still one of my favorites! It's even better the second time around!

I AM SO ALIVE, THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL, I WILL NEVER READ ANYTHING THAT MOVED ME THIS MUCH AS LONG AS I LIVE, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL OH MY LORD

I screamed and squealed at least 15 times during this, took many breaks to attempt to calm myself down and cried a little bit, this is so good, I'm so happy at their union, finally, ahhhhhh

this one shook something deep in my soul, I literally did not see that coming at all, oh my Jesus

this chapter fully broke my heart, I'm screaming into my pillow, honestly

I just HAD to read this chapter today didn't I? Today is infant and pregnancy loss awareness Day and I lit the candle for my 5 angel babies earlier. It was emotionally draining for me. Then this chapter started the water works back up that had stopped earlier :( I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before now. I'm notorious for reviewing only after reading an entire story. You write wonderfully.

Wow. Just wow. I'm hooked! The way you make me smell and hear and feel everything is incredible. I will be reading and reviewing religiously because this is my favorite story ever and I have only read the one chapter so far. I can tell you're a really great writer. If I had an account here I would fave and follow. Maybe I will make one. Your story is worth it.

Oh how the end of a great journey can be so bittersweet :')

What a wonderful final chapter. The preparations, Logan's heartwarming dialogue towards Evie, their vows, the whole darn wedding. So romantic, so beautiful. So wonderful!

Thank you so much for writing this story. I can't wait until I start the sequel!

Sob sob sob. I love, love, LOVE romantic scavenger hunts. Getting to hear Ben's thoughts and emotions in letter form to Evie was just amazing.

I just knew he'd be romantic about it! When he finally kneeled down, I started crying. I'm being so serious. I just die for romantic proposals. ANHHH. I'm so happy he proposed and she said yes!

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Somehow this chapter made me fall more in love with Logan.

This is really good! I don't know Fable, but I found myself getting quite drawn into the story nonetheless. I love the way you've written Evie, she seems very strong and yet still vulnerable, which is a delicate balance to achieve. I also enjoyed the dialogue between Ben and Evie, it was both sweet and funny, and it flowed nicely.

I can't really think of any concrit, this is a very well-written chapter.

Oh lord. The thought of having to write through this emotional pain twice. I feel for you :'(

Seriously though, I cried at the end. I understand why she pushed Ben away but the emotions they must both be feeling right now...I can't handle it. Please let them reconcile for the love of all that's holy. After all, as Ben said, they're still a family, right?! :'(

And here I thought you couldn't top Evie and Ben's first scene. While I love for roses and wine sex, I also love me some rough and tumble, full of emotion sex and this just took the cake for me. Probably didn't help that I'm so in love with Logan x Marina. Larina? Margan? Haha.